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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Elvee, Jun 16, 2010.

  1. Elvee

    Elvee Gold IL'ite

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    My heart was feeling heavy
    and my tears were ready
    Lonely and all alone within four walls
    I was crying and that was not all
    I cried and howled my heart out
    till i realised theres nothing more left
    I dried my tears and stood in front of mirror
    the image smiled at me sarcastically
    Look what you have done to you
    look what impact others had on you

    Never let anyone know you are sad
    for it sometimes make others smile with joy
    Never let your tears show u cry
    for theres no hand to wipe it dry
    Never let anyone hear you howl
    for theres no ears to hear and heal
    Never let anyone see you mourn
    for theres no shoulders to lean on
    Never look depressed
    for theres no heart to understand you

    So smile, smile my friend
    to feel inside happy
    Sometimes Smile my friend
    to show your friends you are happy
    Sometimes smile my friend
    to make your friends happy
    Sometimes smile my friend
    to make your family happy
    and at times, smile my friend
    to make your foes unhappy.

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  2. shreyashreyas

    shreyashreyas Gold IL'ite

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    What a poem elvee.... a boost to drive you to the positive side.... i would say its the best medicine that can be put on tears.... SMILE.

    A motivational poem and a real inspiration for a wounded heart....
     
  3. devapriya

    devapriya IL Hall of Fame

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    very well said Elvee....:thumbsup
    :)
     
  4. Yashikushi

    Yashikushi Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Oh.Its all about ME the SMILE.
    And
    Never let anyone know you are sad
    for it sometimes make others smile with joy

    this is the secret of my energy.
    Elvee.Can you see my happy smiling face.
    SMILE my friend becose its me who makes you SMILE from miles and miles apart.
     
  5. latha85

    latha85 Silver IL'ite

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    ganges Gold IL'ite

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    dear elvee

    your poem is like an energiser. who ever is reading this will get motivated to be positive. thanks for this wonderful poem dear. give more.


    ganges
     
  7. Elvee

    Elvee Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you all for reading. I wrote this few years ago when i had repeated flashback of an incident. So yes this is a motivational verses mainly for me :p

    Yashikushi - yea, i do smile whenever you give me a good fb :rotfland also when i see your creations ^_^
     
  8. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Elvee,
    A very good one on Smile.
    Look I am smiling too..:)

    sriniketan
     
  9. skchivukula

    skchivukula Bronze IL'ite

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    Nice poem with a positive mind
     
  10. Elvee

    Elvee Gold IL'ite

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    Sriniketan - Am happy to share my smile with you all ^_^

    skchivukula - Thank you for the nice fbs ^_^
     

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