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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Devika Menon, Mar 12, 2008.

  1. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    SERENDIPITY



    You saw the beauty of my eyes but missed the pain deep inside,
    Admired the curls around my face but missed the grief I wanted to hide.

    You held my hand when you felt ,never looked at the worry lines
    Watched the attires I was wearing marveled at the very silk fines

    You heard me sing when you wanted to, but did you really listen?
    To the quivering that I felt or the tears in my eyes that glisten

    I was always beside you ,your loyal chaperone
    While you moved away to others I still remained you own

    I quietly erased the smell of another woman from your shirt
    But had inhaled it enough and so was now deeply hurt

    You said you were the master and I was yours to stay
    You came when you wished to or else pushed me away

    How many times I cried hoping you would find
    This lady of yours was yours in both the body and mind

    But you didn’t want to see me beyond your own need
    A lady for your wishes a lady who fulfils her deed

    How many times I cried and grew older than my mind
    How very different every thing was, had I been so blind.?

    You gave me love and then you crushed the very rose you had plucked
    So sure you were now that this would be , since as a lady I was mucked

    I told you time and again to come around as what you did was very wrong
    But you hated me to tell you this and you hated that I ever be strong

    Now you shall be gone at last for me but would I ever cry
    No not at all after all these years my eyes have really gone dry

    So now my dear I shall bid good bye , with all that’s left of gaiety
    My hardships were here till now, dear life, now here I come to serendipity

    Regards,

    Devika
     
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  2. rs18

    rs18 Senior IL'ite

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    Very touching piece devika, Keep it up....


    Cheers
    Ramya
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Devika
    Another very well written beautiful wordings.
     
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    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    very nice devika,
    this could be said by any wife to the guy womaniser, wonderful and aching too..sunkan
     
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    aishu22 Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Devika,
    Here you go!! One more Marvellous piece from you.Throughly enjoyed every word with deep meanings in them.
    Keep Posting!
     
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    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    DEvika,

    Very good one.
     
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    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Devika,

    That was a real good one, too much filled with emotions...

    Great....

    Veda
     
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    Paulina Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Devika,:wow:wow:wow

    As I read ,at first I was feeling sad for the betrayed
    member of our tribe and bemoaning the fate of all such eves
    who walk those paths as part of their destiny.But then ,I said "Hip hip hurray!!"......she broke the spell and realised that there is more to LIFE and she can choose not to be trampled upon and crushed!
    You have portrayed the metamophorsis of a broken hearted eve beautifully.
    Here's to more and more eloquent pieces from you.
    Warm regards
    PAULINABow
     
  10. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Ramya,

    Thanks for the comments. Glad you enjoyed it.

    Love,
    Devika


     

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