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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Aug 19, 2016.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    A perfect round cherubic face
    With gleaming pair of eyes,
    That smile which puts any in a daze,
    Those eyelids long and nice,

    The thorn like sharp yet softer nose,
    Two tender curly braces as ears,
    The silky thin hair that seems to close
    That balder head that's dear

    The rosy cheeks which reveal
    A lovely dimple while smiling,
    The stretchy forehead that feels
    Like a crushed paper while crying,

    Those delicate long stems, the arms
    Reaching out to hold anything,
    Such lovely feet that doesn't harm,
    Though kicking everything

    Such softer skin like a rose petal,
    Bringing such an immense joy,
    Is dearer than any prize or medal.
    What more can I say, Oh boy!
     
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  2. jskls

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    Nice one! Again Im imagining a new born baby here.
     
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    RGS,
    What a lovely poem! Isn't it like a photograph, forever engraved in our memories!:)
    Thanks for the write up.
    Vaidehi
     
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    Thanks Jskls for your quick feedback.
    Yes, you are right. -rgs
     
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    Thanks Vaidehi, for your nice feedback. Yes, you are correct. -rgs
     
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    my thoughts on your poem.....

    to read this poem for just one time
    is not sufficient i feel
    for i think this is more like a mine
    filled with beautiful thoughts not unlike a spiel

    now....don't go scolding me for ruining your beautiful verses...just that you inspired to write these lines for you in appreciation!

    Wonderful poem! an apt description for a newborn!!
     
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  7. rgsrinivasan

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    :) Not at all, BeautifulLife30. Happy to read your attempt as well.
    Thanks a lot for your appreciation. -rgs
     
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    Lovely poem !! Nice poems season in IL ....Thanks for sharing @rgsrinivasan ...
     
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    RGS Nice one.only you can write awesome poems in both languages
     
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    Thanks a lot @Lathssv, for your appreciation.
    Happy to contribute my two cents here with other stalwarts! -rgs
     
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