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Revenge..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PoojaShah, Jul 23, 2017.

  1. PoojaShah

    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    Your goodbye to my hello
    Was a bitter pill to swallow

    Blood dripped into my soul
    In my heart you'd left a hole

    That day I promised myself
    One day I'd make you crawl

    And I'm glad that
    It didn't take long at all

    One fine day, you came back to me
    To your utter horror, I rejected thee

    You begged, you cried
    Having seen that I smiled

    You'd played with my feelings
    So I turned you into a weakling

    And this time I bade you a farewell
    So that you can go to hell.

    Pooja Shah.
     
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  2. NatLuv

    NatLuv Senior IL'ite

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    Wonderful
     
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    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you.:)
     
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    hi Pooja.
    nice written. but revenge is not the solution of every bitter experience. just shared my opinion. dont take me wrong.
     
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    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    Hii
    I happen to agree with you..but I'm an impersonal writer so it's just a poem nothing more!!
    Thank you.
     
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    Itsmylife143 Platinum IL'ite

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    Nice One Title should be like "Your play. My game" ;)
     
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    Thank you..:)
     
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