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Rest are Women!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sureshmiyer, Mar 12, 2010.

  1. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    We worship Women,
    We love Women as Mothers
    We seek affection
    from Women as Sisters
    We are Men

    We place Woman
    on a Pedestal, We need Her
    We use Her, We misuse Her
    We are Men

    We love our Wife,
    We hate Daughters
    We flirt Women;
    We abuse Her
    We are Men

    When Women dares! and
    Gets down her pedestal
    We hate her,
    we fear her
    We are Men

    Wonder! Why God fears
    to get down from pedestal
    The offerings will stop from all,
    Shall ignore the Lord
    We are Men
    The Rest are Women
     
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  2. Kamalji

    Kamalji IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sureshbhai,

    that was a good one, never heard before.Yes we love our wife, but dont like our daughter, for we ahve to give dowry and she will cost us financially, is it ? Well , so many think that way, in our family they say, ever Girl is a lakshmi , and she brings her own luck, but who can tell that to the people.

    Good one.

    Regards

    kamal
     
  3. Tubelight

    Tubelight Bronze IL'ite

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    Searing poem.
    coming from a man,
    a confession.

    Man loves woman
    if she's a deity,
    dumb, static and reactionless.

    Man hates the deity
    if she's a woman
    alive, thinking and fearless.

    Man loves Images
    built by himself
    with his wishes, his ideals, his dreams

    When shadows rebel,
    and pedestals crumble
    Man mourns the image
    the image that never was.

    When dreams are dead
    and deities gone
    the rest are women
    feared, hated and burnt.

    Neither Deities nor Images
    but Entities they are;
    Can man never love women
    the women they are ?
     
  4. karunamurty

    karunamurty Bronze IL'ite

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    Mr. Suresh,
    An honest confession of a man on your behalf, kudos to that.
    Tubelight, thanks for the counter poem. liked it very much esp. the part "Man hates the deity...... if she's a woman ....alive, thinking and fearless."
     
  5. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    hi kamalji

    thanks for your views

    cheers
    suresh
     
  6. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    Hi TL

    What a wonderful poem in reply!
    Never heard of it

    thanks

    suresh

     
  7. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    hi karuna

    thanks for your views
    ya, the counterpoem by TL was really good

    cheers
    suresh

     
  8. Tubelight

    Tubelight Bronze IL'ite

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    Suresh,
    You never heard of it because it was composed by me for your comment box.
    :)
     
  9. sureshmiyer

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    hi TL

    that was so nice of you
    thanks a lot

    cheers
    suresh

     
  10. ganges

    ganges Gold IL'ite

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    Dear suresh,

    A very different but true poem. Except that I dont think men hate their daughters. I heard that usualy men are very fond of their daughters. The mother with her sons. We are not having daughters ( Which Me and my hus were very much longing to have ) so I cannot digest that one line.

    nats, the reply poem also is superb.

    thanks for sharing friend. Keep posting more

    ganges
     

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