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regional poetry

Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by neetugtb, Jul 21, 2014.

  1. neetugtb

    neetugtb Silver IL'ite

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    Got inspired from Viji Aunty, wrote a hindi poem in english, posting some translation also.
    MUJHE CHALTE JAANA HAI

    Zindagi chalne ka naam, mujhe chalte jaana hai. To move on, is life, I have to move on.
    Na koi chaaya, na koi paraav, jahan ruk sustana hai. No shade, no stop over, where I can
    Bas chalte jaana hai, mujhe chalte jaana hai. pause and rest. I have to just move on.

    Jis din se yeh rah pakri, bachpan choot gaya, The day I took to this path,my childhood got
    Woh natkhat, alhad bachpan peeche choot gaya. Left behind, naughty, careless, childhood.
    Bani bheed thi maarg darshak mujhe boojh gaya, I sensed that a crowd was guiding me.
    Thi sabki apni manzil, nahin soojh gaya. I didn’t get that everybody had a selfish motive.
    Meri manzil kya thi, pataa nahin, I didn’t know about my goal, I don’t know what I found or
    Bheed ke dhakko mein kya khoya,kya paaya,
    kuch pataa nahin. Lost when the crowd shoved me

    Andhero mein bhatka, pathro se takraya, Wandered in dark, knocked into rocks,
    kisi bhi raahi ne na imaandaari se rasta soojhaaya. No companion honestly showed a way,
    Thokre khaate,girte padte kaise vakt ka saath nibhaaya, crashing, tumbling, I passed time
    Oos sangarsh ka koi bhi shan main na kabhi bhula paya. cannot forget a moment of the struggle
    Aakhir thak kar, toot kar, jab prabhu ki sharan mein aaya, at last,tired,broken I took to lord
    To oosne ungli thaam ke mujhe jeevan ka path dikhlaya. He led me on path of life
    Zindagi chalne ka naam, mujhe chalte jaana hai, life is to move on, I have to do it
    Is seekh ko mujhe saare jag mein failaana hai. i have to spread this preaching around.

    Manzil to nahin dikhti aaj bhi kahin door tak, Even today, I am far away from my goal
    Thak kar aaj bhi hota hoon aansoo-on mein lathpath, When tired, I get smeared in my tears.
    Par phir bhi apni raah par chal deta hoon,
    Choti moti jeeton se pet bhar leta hoon.
    AAj bhi rode raste ko atkaate hein,
    Raahi raah bhulane ko jaan lagaate hein.
    Main girta hoon, phir oothtaa hoon, ooth kar chal padta hoon,
    Kyonki mujhe chalte jaana hai,
    Na thak ruk jaana hai, na thak pachtaana hai
    Bas chalte jaana hai, mujhe chalte jaana hai.
     
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  2. PriyaSrini

    PriyaSrini Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Nice one indeed Neetu :2thumbsup:

    I have a suggestion, edit your post such that you have your poem first and it's translation lines separately below, so this would look presentable.
     
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  3. neetugtb

    neetugtb Silver IL'ite

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    HI @PriyaSrini,

    Please delete this post as I have posted an edited version as per your suggestion.

    Thanks.
     

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