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New Line poems

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, Jun 20, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    A girl in love
    if cheated pregnant
    if cheats marriage

    Grandfather caughs in dark
    Thinking of grandma?

    In English school
    Child cries.. amma

    A girl's grievance

    School subjects..my choice
    Dresses to wear..my choice
    Jwellaries to wear..my choice
    Food items to eat..my choice
    Going to movies...my choice
    Bridegroom for me is your choice
    my dear parents,
    Where is the justice?

    To get peace of mind
    I went to learn yoga
    By my side in the class
    she in a tight dress
    The peace of mind
    was broken into pieces
     
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  2. aami

    aami New IL'ite

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    again its wonderfull!i really enjoyed it...ur poems r deeply philosophical..i love to read it....so much is there in few lines...i really appreciate ur talent..
    aami
     
  3. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    The meaning is beautifully conveyed with minimum words! Congrats for having thought of this.
     
  4. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Thanks, Malathijagan. I need not have to praise your poems which has won the acclaim already from many ilites.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  5. reeja

    reeja New IL'ite

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    :mrgreen: Hi,
    The satire in those lines are excellent!!! None can just read them without saying a word of appreciation!
    I love to read you and waiting for more.... the saying goes....''thunder comes before the lightening'', awaiting the light and fury.
    Regards,
    Reeja:yes:
     
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  6. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi, reeja,

    I am thrilled to have you as my fan. Yes, you can expect more poems along these lines from me.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  7. BlueBoy

    BlueBoy New IL'ite

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    Fantastic poems sirji..good..Nicely written, short n sweet !!
     

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