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Natural Love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Aug 30, 2024.

  1. RatnaMalliswari

    RatnaMalliswari Gold IL'ite

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    In the crack of dawn
    Such a ethereal beauty of nature
    I could see and hear from my beach window view
    the chirping birds sound and
    sweet morning waves were waking me up
    Happy waves surrounded my room
    I was receiving your love with your hug
    My head was over your head
    My lips were kissing you
    It was my first love of the day
    I was in a move to make your day
    You just holded my finger so tight
    I sat back to see my first love
    You are my gift from my womb
    Your my unlimited happiness
    I bless you with my unconditional love.
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

    Thyagarajan IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi welcome after long hiatus.
    Glad u made your re-entry with a dream song
    From a just mother.
    super. God Bless
     
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    Hello Sir
    Thank you for your appreciation and spending your valuable time to read my poetry.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    beautiful !!
     
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    Dear Ratna,

    The child of morning, rosey-fingered dawn is the best time in the entire day. It's the best time to do the job that holds the most important meaning in your life. If you are a student, start studying the toughest subject, because your brain is most active during this period. If you are a health-freak, start jogging or running, and don't forget to do your yoga and pranayam session. If you don't have any such undertakings, simply enjoy the pristine nature.
     
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    Rosy-fingered, sorry for the typo!
     
  7. RatnaMalliswari

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    Hello
    Hello @Tamrakshar
    Thank you for your response,well said.
    I do enjoy beauty of nature with my morning cup of coffee.
    I thank God for his creation.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    Hello @radar30062
    Thank you for visiting poetry column and spending your valuable time for reading and giving your feedback.
    Regards
    Ratna
     

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