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Mysterious Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rith, Apr 18, 2016.

  1. 28neha

    28neha Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Rith welcome again :cheer::cheer::cheer:..my cheer girls are dancing for you :)

    good start of Mysterious....:)
     
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    Lonely..I am so lonely....just this morning I was humming this song :)

    Looking forward to reading this story :)
     
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    wow, a new story!! Loved the first episode. Can't wait to find out what is next ....it is also a love story right?
     
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    great Intro Rith. Happy to see you here with a new story. between is this going to be a love story or suspense thriller.
    the title has left us dubious and thinking :confundio1:
     
  5. Rith

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    Episode 2

    I know I am pretending to divert myself though I am not. I was explaining this to Sarthak during our break one fine day. “If you fall in love, I would be the first person to support. But what is this pal? Without anything about that girl, how can you waste your time and happiness?”

    “Yeah, you are right” I gave a very vague reply. “Don’t worry bro. at times I think about her. Otherwise I am not losing myself as you are worried”

    “Oh really! That’s great to know” he sounded caustic. I looked at him with glinting eyes. He continued “Then why did you reject Pavani’s proposal. She is the hottest babe in our company. When all bachelors and married ran behind her she followed you like a hutch dog. I don’t think that Micra lady could even stand in front of her”

    Yes! Pavani is one of the hottest pretty women. When she joined our company there was lot of politics to put her under their own division. Finally she was put into ERP section which was administered by Sarthak. Even Sarthak tried his luck with her. Makaranth who was married and got kids conveyed that he was still searching for bride. That was a big comedy when the truth was revealed by our great Sarthak. Someway she couldn’t impress me though I know she is trying to do so. No one has impressed me so far.

    Who are you pretty lady! Why am I longing for you! Could a half covered face behind a glass window turn down a person’s life??Sounds different” I was surprised at my sudden change

    A week passed.

    My house is a duplex villa located at the heart of the city. My room is in the first floor. There is a small garden with canned sofas in the sit out area. I love reading books in that spot.

    I hit the bed late the previous night after partying with friends. I couldn’t make it early. I hit my cellphone when it screamed high with an attempt to wake me up. Why Mr.Sun is so punctual. I cursed the time calendar and occupied my bathroom with my half closed eyes. The day started bad. Number one. Unfortunately I was unable grab my undershirt which increases my temper to the core. Number two..My shirts were yet to be pressed adding more fuel to my anger. I went down bellowing at my mom “Mom…Mom…where the hell you have placed my undershirts. And see my shirts are yet to be pressed. I am running late mom”

    “In a couple of months you should start taking care of all these things my son” my dad replied folding the newspaper. He would have completed it from the heading of first page till the last page dot. I gave a puzzled look at both. My mom came out of the kitchen packing my lunch boxes. She grinned seeing me topless and wrapped towel covering the rest half

    My father replied “I was asked to work at the client site. I will be traveling to Finland by September. Since I am a diabetic patient your mom wanna join me”

    Me: “Did you think about me”

    Mom: “For that only I am asking you to marry” I stared at her. She continued “till you find your life partner take care of your undershirts, underpants, pressing your shirts whatever. Here is your coffee honey. And yeah, coffee, breakfast as well”

    Life without mom and dad; I couldn’t imagine. This big house gonna be a lonely place. More of being alone I was much worried about my gang. My house will become their bar. I imagined myself cleaning the utensils, washing machine use, vacuum cleaning the house.chi…chi…nasty imagination.

    “I am going to hire a stay at home maid” I announced

    “Lady or……” my mom winked

    “oh yeah. How can I leave this house to some unknown?” I mumbled loud enough she could hear me

    Mom: “Pavani is ok for me. We shall arrange for marriage next month if you say YES”

    Sarthak made his entry. Hearing Pavani’s name he about turn and started walking out. I caught hold of his neck and dragged him in. “I know you would be the culprit. I will push you out of the car today on the highways”

    Satty: “Careful buddy. I caught hold of your towel. You topless. Speak less else you will be dress-less”

    Oops. I released him and ran upstairs holding my towel. Dirty fellow!! I cursed him badly. When I was about to enter I heard him shouting “I am yet to explain about Micra macha”

    I ran back in a hurry to shut his nasty mouth. My mom might have heard that. “Micra?? That’s a car name right. Or a A foreigner?? “ Her eyes widened

    My dad rebuked “Daughter in law from a foreign country. Jesus!” and nodded his head in dismay

    I heaved Sarthak towards my room “I have absolutely no plans for my marriage. Micra is still a car. I...I..am planning to gift mom” I blabbered and shouted after I have vanished from their sight “as my surprise gift”. I threw him on my bed and covered his head with pillows. He yelled “Man! I have pressed my shirts and pants neatly pal. If you make it nasty I have to come to office like you just wrapping myself in towel”

    I tried to cover him in bed sheet. He clutched my towel. My next alarm ringed. I released him got ready and we came down. I emptied the breakfast plate in a rush and jumped on my car.

    I was keeping on thinking of my dad’s reaction and each time I hit Satty.

    “Hey!! You are hitting me for umpteenth time” Sarthak held my hand.

    “Bloody pig. Mongoose. You have embarrassed me” I tried hitting him again but then I missed balance. My car bumped on the car in front of me which I failed to notice.

    We both parked our car to extreme left corner of the road making way for others

    OMG..my bad..Thats a turquoise blue Nissan Micra. I prayed all known deities to favour my luck and Yesssssss! My fair and lovely beauty came out of the car. This time in blue jeans, black kurta with orange embroidery work. She might me 5.4. Her pony tail was beautifully dancing.

    “Thank god! Not a big damage. Just a small dent” Sarthak was investigating the car while I was examining her

    “SMALL DENT??? It is so big” she was shattering. I was standing frozen still not believing my luck. I met her again

    Satty replied “Ah..No..I was actually speaking about my car”

    She placed her hands on her hip. “I am getting late already. Hey you..you drove the car right. Your eyes are at your back or what?”

    Satty shook me “buddy! Why the hell are you standing like this?”

    I whispered without taking my eyes off her “Micra lady macha”

    Sarthak’s lips stretched long. “er..Sister..No issues. My buddy will get a new car..or he will give his car to you..ok..cool down.. Calm down..you should be a lovely bird..ok..done be an angry bird..it doesn’t suit your face” he tried to comfort her

    I rubbed his shoulders “but macha..” Satty replied in helpless tone “What now da?”. I replied “her voice is not that soft as her face da”

    “What??” she pouted. Her pink face clearly depicted her anger

    “Please be calm for some time” he pressed my hands and mumbled understanding the current situation. I noted her car number TN 12 9787. “Bro, 12 means red hills registration right”

    Sarthak gave a stern look clinching his teeth “Is it so important now?” facing her he apologized “Sorry for the inconvenience. We may pay for the damage”

    “I am joining in a new company. My first day is so bad because of you guys. Not required. I will manage”. She tried to get in her car

    I bellowed “May I know your name please”. She gave her reply by thrashing hard the car door and drove fast. I quickly got into the car and followed her. Sarthak sounded deserted. “I am upset with your strange behavior da macha”

    Me: “ I don’t want to miss the opportunity da. I found neither the toe ring nor the wedding chain. She is still single bro”

    Satty: “What if she has a boyfriend?”

    Me: “let us murder him” I grinned at him admiring his shocking face

    Mystery to be continued..
     
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  6. Rith

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    Ha ha ha. Just like that dear. sorry for not informing prior..
     
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    Thanks twinklingstar. It is all because of your support and continuous encouragement
     
  8. Rith

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    Thanks honey. Love you loads..
     
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    thanks srilaxmi. hope you will enjoy the story
     
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    Leenam honey, you were waiting for this...OMG i am so happy to have friends like you :hearteyes::hearteyes:
     

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