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My Soul

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hasa, Jan 7, 2008.

  1. hasa

    hasa New IL'ite

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    Look into my soul

    No one's been there

    It's there you'll find

    A path to my heart

    You must know my soul

    And wish to be entwined

    Do not falter or fear

    Or passage will be denied

    If it's my heart you long for

    It's within my soul

    Everything that is me

    Waits to be found

    I'm within my soul

    You found me there

    Hold my heart close to you

    For it's soul is quite fragile

    Trek within my soul

    I'm brutally laid bare

    I'm more than you thought

    Will you be one with me?

    For its within my soul

    That love is created

    You're inside of me

    The path to my heart
     
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  2. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Hasa ma'am,

    We try to seek the soul within by letting the gifted body in its natural way. It envelopes infinite knowledge that when utilized in a positive way sends out a ray of hope and vigor to live life to the fullest extent possible !!

    A very well knitted poem!! Congrats.. Yes, I met your soul and the intricate relationship will be established very soon !!:queen:cheers

    Regards and wishes to write more
    RamyaVaradharajan

     

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