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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, Apr 3, 2007.

  1. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Please find attached a poem written by me-'Religion and Spirituality'
    Malathi
     

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  2. vidhi

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    Dear Malathi

    Very beautifully you have expressed the essence of both. Good work. Keep it up. Thank you for posting

    regards
    vidhi
     
  3. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Malathi,

    Your poem is very good. I would like to add

    Religion is man-made
    spirituality is devine

    Religion is just a path
    spirituality is the lead

    Religion tries to control
    spirituality frees mind and soul

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  4. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    A commendable poem Malathi, very well written. The thoughts are profound.

    L, Kamla
     
  5. cheer

    cheer Silver IL'ite

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    I like the poem Malathi & tamilwonder i luv ur added version too.
     
  6. Vidya24

    Vidya24 Gold IL'ite

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    very good poen,Malathi. The thoughts are contemporary and sentimental. Keep posting more.
     
  7. jothi

    jothi Senior IL'ite

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    Malathi,

    Very nice poem. very simple and nicely written.

    Regards,
    Jothi.
     
  8. PushpavalliSrinivasan

    PushpavalliSrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you for your encouraging views about my poem.
    Regards,
    Malathi
     
  9. sunitha

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    Dear Pushpavalli S

    Are you and Malathijagan the same?
     
  10. PushpavalliSrinivasan

    PushpavalliSrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello!
    Thank you for your appreciation of my poem. I Your addition makes for better reading. Thank you.
    Rgds,
    Malathi
     

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