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my poem to my daughter prido

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sunkan, Feb 1, 2008.

  1. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Sundari,

    That was a lovely poem, so colorful! I liked the way you brought Nature into it.....beautiful. I am sure your daughter enjoyed it!
     
  2. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sunkan,

    What a lovely poem...shows how it came right out of your heart.
    Do not blame me if I 'lift' your words to adorn the b'day cards of my daughters!!
    Like a true friend, I shall put them in quotes and write your name under the words...no fear:))))

    L, Kamla
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    yes sudha,
    this poem did bring out the best in her she was too excited and i am really amazed how i got it, may be recently reading too many poems for valentine made me write this for her, she is a imp and a very demanding child in our house so she can set the nature think her an imp....sundari
     
  4. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear kamla,
    i never knew you would like it so much pl dont mention my name there, you might not get the effect as an original and i as a friend would love to get your daughter's reaction to you when u send it, words do come out of our heart sometime they amaze us, may be keeping in mind her life with me so far made me write those words..pl go ahead minus my name i would appreciate it any day...sundari
     
  5. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice poem. Very nice choice of words and great writing style. dear Sundari.
     
  6. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    happy u liked the poem which came by fluke as i was thinking about her, the little imp who is still dominating haha joking a mom's thoughts..
    when are u going to share ur day with us, nice romantic happenings did he take you out or candle lit at home,, thanku sundari
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sunkan nice wording. beautiful poem
     
  8. kanaka

    kanaka Bronze IL'ite

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    :clap:clap:clap:clap:clap:clap:clap:clap:clapYou have a good poetic sense. Wishing ur daughter all happiness. kanaka:clap:clap:clap:clap
     
  9. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello akka


    this is great
    pull those strings
    straight from the heart
    taught with frills
    from dear nature
    better than a `signature'
    birthday card.....!!
    mom all the way

    sathya
     
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    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sundari
    Sorry I could not reply earlier as i must have missed this question..
    Nothing exciting..I think yu are referring here to my anniv. we had to goto temple in morning and afternoon a couple joined us fo lunch and evening we saw football on t.v. Looks like I always fall short of ur expectations..what to do?!?
     

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