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My Open Diary

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Nov 9, 2024.

  1. RatnaMalliswari

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    Today, my diary is open to the world
    Everyone now knows who you were—
    How you were, and what you were
    All these days, my diary has been filled
    With memories of pure love and profound pain.

    After your passing, many have asked me,
    "How do I draw my strength to live without you?"
    You gave your protection to the country,
    And you gave me your unbreakable strength.

    Now, I carry on—fulfilling my duties,
    With love, with affection, and unwavering devotion
    I never regret,But I deeply miss you.

    I knew you more than anyone else.
    Tough on the outside, tender within—like a coconut,
    But with a heart of warmth
    I still smile, remembering your laugh,
    The way you joked about everything.

    Even today, I live on through tears.
    The world may not see the weight I bear
    But I move ahead, taking you as my silent guide—
    In every choice, in every step I take.

    I will live on in memories,
    And fill my life’s diary
    I will honor you,For all my years.

    Regards
    Ratna
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    The poem is addressed to a loving soul a life long companion
    That each line each stanza exudes the passionate love that was
    And Leading light and torch bearer at present.
    A weekend musing in a serene calm evening by diamond easwari @RatnaMalliswari
     
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    Hello @Thyagarajan Sir
    Thank you so much for your kind appreciation. Your support truly inspires me to continue expressing and sharing my poetry. From the bottom of my heart, I am deeply grateful for your patience and encouragement, which continually nurture and elevate my writing.
    I appreciate the honor of the title.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    I must suggest you to send a couple of your poems to magazine part of popular daily like Deccan herald Deccan Chronicle and other regional weekly and fortnightly. Just try and you may get accolades and approbation from right quarters.
    Regards
     
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    Hello @Thyagarajan Sir
    I would like to respond to your kind feedback with a few lines in my own poetic style:

    When a wordsmith showers words of compliment,
    It is an unwavering encouragement to an emerging poet.

    Such words fuel and strengthen poetic insight,
    Inspiring the expression of philosophical depth to the world.

    May you continue to shower blessings upon me,
    Until the day comes when I transform from a raw diamond to a polished piece.

    Thank you so much for your thoughtful suggestion! I feel truly blessed to receive such kind compliments from you, and I will certainly take your advice to heart, and I will move forward.

    Regards
    Ratna
     
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