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My love poem based on soccer

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, Mar 20, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    We met and found that we are a good match

    We had a great kick-off to our love
    through several passes and exchanges

    But, suddenly you have gone off side (off sight)

    Is this a penalty to me because
    I did not ring you up?

    You are the goal in my life

    If you agree to marry me
    I will get printed the yellow card (manjal pathrikai)

    If you reject me my blood will make
    the yellow card into a red card.
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello TDU
    Can see the passion and love for the soccer game in this poem..
    If your goal doesn't get married to you, you are going to turn yellow to Red....hehehe
    Nice wordings.
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Made me smile,when I read this Tamildownunder. Funny. Thanks. -rgs
     

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