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My Happiness In The Rewind Button

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunkan, Feb 11, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    [FONT=&quot]My happiness is in the rewind button [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Am I being selfish?[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Life moves like a lightening[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]But still holding the past,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]My childhood seem to mesmerize[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Like no other that last[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]Those teenage ages that flashed through[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]With fog and mountain breeze[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Dreamy were those days[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Why not now indeed[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]Happiness were the moments [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Seeking not moving[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Stilled were my thoughts[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Imagination rowing[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]A drizzle made me romantic[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Little stream rolling[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Sending jingles through my feet[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Filled with unknown feelings[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]Colorful were my views[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Soulful were my mind[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Never felt the world go by[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]So fast pristine.[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]Why? Why? why do I ?[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Press the rewind to [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Be happy again…sunkan[/FONT]
     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    DEar sunkan,

    Good one.
     
  3. meenakrishnan

    meenakrishnan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan,
    Nice one!
    Childhood memories are so beautiful and precious to be cherished forever.Rewind button is a must to keep our body and mind young...
    Love
    Meena
     
  4. sathyavenkat

    sathyavenkat New IL'ite

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    Dear sunkan, You made us relive our childhood memories too...thru this beautiful poem- sathya
     
  5. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello akka

    have followed every step
    yours
    mesmerize the past
    mountain breeze
    when cheeks were pressed
    with warm chubby palms
    imagination rowing
    i thought we were always
    moving moving
    drizzle and streams
    romantic
    views colourful
    so pristine...
    sure i press the rewind button too
    in thoughts so colourful
    at play

    sathya
     
  6. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    தேங்க்ஸ் டா
    நீ இல்லாமல் நானா எல்லா இடத்திலும் நீயும் நிறைந்தாய் akka
     
  7. SoaringSpirit

    SoaringSpirit Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan,

    Extremely well written. Hats-off! I could feel the warmth of your childhood from your poem.

    Transported me to some wonderful memories of my own childhood days. It always makes me high to think of those days and keeps me floating in sheer happiness for days to come!

    Thank YOU for making me rewind to that heavenly phase in life!

    Please keep them coming.
    SS
     
  8. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    yeah i find we enjoy more that phase than any...sunkan
     
  9. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sunkan
    It was really great pressing the rewind button. Nice poem............
     
  10. latamurali

    latamurali Gold IL'ite

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    Dear sunkan mam

    Wow........nice poem..........all of u becoming great poets/excellent writers............and thatoo writing in simple words....:hatsoff:hatsoff:bowdown:bowdown..........

    its always nnice to think of our school/colllege days.........what a gala time .those are golden periods of the life......to be cherieshed forever.............free of commitments/worries/.....

    Thank u very much for sharing...........

    Keep posting.......
     

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