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My Feelings.....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mistt, Oct 25, 2021.

  1. Mistt

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    I can't imagine you as you are a yaksha for me.

    I look for you like a Chathaka bird looks for rain.
    I dance inside of me like a little girl dancing when she glimpses ice cream truck.

    I stick to you like a lotus flower which follows the movement of the Sun.

    I smile while praying for you as I don't know any details of you.

    I forget my struggles and be happy while communicate with you.

    I always cherish those pleasure moments which we shared

    I try to be like a sunflower which loves the Sun unconditionally.

    I seek blessings of God for no quarrels between us and keep this attachment forever.
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    This short poem of “you” & “me” moments raises a question.
    “Who” In the sonnet to be discovered
    While The “me” in it - represents “you”
    But then “ who” is that “who” ?
    One can go ahead with wild guess!
    The “u” could be yaksha , chadhaka, dancer, gum bottle or glue or adhesive & capable of being worshipped and a great listener and yet attached..
    Hmmm .... splitting hairs .. no way.. tell me who is that “U” in the sonnet.
    Regards.
     
  3. jskls

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    Like this Sunflower Mistt?? whoever it is I am sure they must be worth of admiration. Nice one
     
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    What a pleasant surprise, Lakshmi!:hearteyes: Very happy to see you here after many months. Thank you for your lovely comments.:smile:
     
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