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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lovelyme, Nov 15, 2011.

  1. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Waiting is boring of course
    But.....
    Waiting for you was not...
    You were alone
    In that small dark home!!
    Yet.....
    You seemed to be happy there...

    I always tried to talk to you
    But you didn't
    I tried to touch you
    But.....
    You slapped me away
    Without a drop of mercy!!

    Oh God!
    I feel strange...
    Because
    That didn't hurt me
    Instead...
    They brought us closer!!

    I was waiting for you
    To come and talk to me
    But.....
    You happily kept me waiting,
    And I enjoyed it
    Because...
    I always knew
    That one day you
    Would have to come to me!!

    At last..
    My long wait came to an end.
    And the day had come...
    HE sent you to me
    But.....
    You came out crying
    And.....
    I welcomed you
    With a "teary smile"...
    Holding you softly in my arms!!!
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Sensibly written about getting your baby. Isn't it Lovelyme? Happy to read. Thanks. -rgs
     
  3. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Thanks rgs ji. GOD gave him to me after so much of prayers and after goin thro' a tedious sessions of treatments. I still rem the day when the result turned out to b positive and i cud feel my mother crying inside her wide smile... GOD did so much of miracles in my life and one is my sweet plum.... Though we have have tough times often, I cud sense HIS unending love for me....
     
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    Brought a cool smile on my face..Thanks dear..i really enjoyed each and every word of it..Though am not a mother yet I just felt it now..

    Very sensible..
     
  5. lovelyme

    lovelyme Silver IL'ite

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    Thanks dear..... u will definitely realize ths beautiful feeling n u'll find it much more than a poem can portray....
     
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    PriyaVibushanam Senior IL'ite

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    Wowwwwwww That was really a good one.... Keep up the good work lovelyme.....
     
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    thank u so very much priya dear.............
     
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    Wooow...u bght tears in my eyes :)

    I can relate to ur feelings cuz I'm in those waiting phases too :)

    God Bless u n ur Lil one!
     
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    Thanks ingr.... plz take care of ur health and all the very bests in advance n of course my prayers........GOD bless..
     

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