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My Addicted Relationship

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Anjelin, Oct 28, 2020.

  1. Anjelin

    Anjelin Gold IL'ite

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    How you became an indispensable part of my life, makes me feel so surprised,
    With your knowledge, fun and no strife, You got me fully mesmerized!

    Seeing us always together, Got us so many admonishing faces.
    To avoid flak from others, We searched for lonely places.

    This is not good for you, O dear, Was the continuous advice I heard,
    But you turned a deaf ear, Never retorting with a word.

    You continued to entertain, With everything latest ,
    All your energy I would drain , yet for me, you will recharge fast.

    Bringing the whole world, At my fingertip,
    You transformed my world, To as small as a microchip.

    My life had fully changed with your seduction,
    the beautiful association turned into an addiction.

    Slowly I started bearing the burnt, Dark eyes depicted our relationship,
    A harder lesson I learnt, As my health took a dip.

    Made me realise my mistake, Concluded, from you I need a break ,
    To bring my life back on track, Some sacrifices I should make.

    You never realised my pain, With difficulty I continued ignoring you,
    Never once did you complain, As I stopped missing you.

    Still a part of my life, you continue to be, With reduced interaction, I got a bit free
    Life is bliss now, don’t you agree? This is the story of my mobile and me.
     
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  2. joylokhi

    joylokhi Platinum IL'ite

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    Lovely poem on our tryst with mobile - so much an integral part of our lives these days :blush:
     
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  3. Thyagarajan

    Thyagarajan IL Hall of Fame

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    :hello:Kudos to OP
    A HEART TO HEART TALK .


    Till it got hot in hand
    A feather touch here and there
    A cuddle and cajole,
    A tie bit, a nugget
    A mine of info
    Mobile baby you provided this long.

    In good time, bad time
    You came announced
    But now after millions of minutes
    With you,

    I’m chargeless and changeless
    I must care my eyes and arthritic knuckles
    So I shelve you baby
    For most of day and night

    Here you my mobile
    go obsolete or out of date
    While I desert you
    Here I go for i-phone 11
    Bluetooth enabled
    My new love of all gadgets.
     
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  4. smileypooja7

    smileypooja7 Junior IL'ite

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    very nicely written...i was still wondering and guessing what your writing about ...but yes must agree mobile has got us all totally addicted .
     
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