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Musing on Fear of death...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by vash, Sep 26, 2014.

  1. vash

    vash Silver IL'ite

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    A thought came across my mind as I started Musing on Fear of death


    Why there is no fear for living righteously only fear of death,
    Why not we long to leave blame free life till our last breath?

    Why there is no fear for hurting loved ones only fear of death
    Is there no tender feelings left in us, all left is wrath?

    Fearing for loss of life is nothing but stupidity,
    Why not we realize there is no eternity!

    No there is no fear of death not to me,
    Am not guilty I await to go in peace and glee..

    Still there is pain to leave those loved ones,
    Who cling upon us seldom realizing one day its their turn.

    Is this why we fear death but not to live,
    Oh, how can I answer as I am still alive! :D
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    "No there is no fear of death not to me,
    Am not [COLOR=#009900 !important]guilty[/COLOR] I await to go in peace and glee.. "

    Lovely lines and wishful thinking Vash! And a great start too! Cheers! -rgs
     
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  3. vash

    vash Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you so much for appreciating rgsrinivasan mademydaysmiley
     
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    Good one!
    Well said - "Still there is [COLOR=#009900 !important]pain[/COLOR] to leave those loved ones"
     
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  5. vash

    vash Silver IL'ite

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    Thank You :)
     
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  6. madhuprabha

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    Hi Vash,
    Beautiful musings. Well said. Fear of the unknown is what makes death scary, but living things and relations are tangible, hence we easily hurt and deceive them.

    ''Why there is
    no fear for hurting loved ones only fear of death
    Is there no tender feelings left in us, all left is wrath?''

    I liked the above lines very much.
    friendssmiley
     
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    kalpavriksham Gold IL'ite

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    why not we long to lead a blame free life

    what great line is this ? JUST i could not move on further.
    yes if only people lead blame free lives, then no work for Mr. Chithraguptan right?

    nice, very practical poem!

    warm wishes
     
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    Thanks for appreciating my musing :) you rightly pointed out madhuprabha I always wonder about that line, why we never fear for hurting our loved ones.. even i might have hurt so many.. thinking about those moments makes me feel that i should correct myself in futute. :|
     
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    Thanks a lot! :) Yeah right how i wish Mr. Chithraguptan to retire and just enjoy his life gigglingsmiley

    oops i just realised there is a typo in that line it should be "Why not we long to live blame free life till our last breath?" and not leave doh1:oops:
     

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