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music of the sea

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Oct 22, 2007.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi Il's

    Without your encouraging feedbacks, i would never have attempted again....so now you are the reason for my coming back here with my scribblings....:tongue

    MUSIC OF THE SEA

    Far off near the horizon
    as the sun is painting the sky
    I see few bobbing heads..
    I wonder are they mermaids..
    Listening to the music played by the sea....

    listen to the music, with a serene mind,
    the tales of beauty and hidden secrets
    of the fearless nature and the tireless pursuits
    and inner strength.


    The beautiful sea with a mind of her own,
    hitting the shore with her foamy waves,
    i wonder why...
    is she trying to clean the shore
    because we have forgotten to ..
    Or is she giving us
    a mild warning, beware,
    or i will take back what is mine....
     
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  2. Shreesundaram

    Shreesundaram Silver IL'ite

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    Hi shanvy,

    very nice poetry,

    Wow !!! Your children are good in Art. You are very good in writting .

    Very good, Keep it up,

    Regards

    SHREESUNDARAM
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow Shanthi beautiful wordings you have described the strength of the sea so beautifully.
    Keep it up
     
  4. balamotwani

    balamotwani Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi Shanti,

    Good :clap:clap:clap. You've started writing poems. Great.

    I dont have words to appreciate your talent.

    Keep writing.

    Bala
     
  5. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Shan,

    It is a real good one...

    I am really surprised to see a new Shan, in IL.... Great.... Keep going.....
     
  6. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi shreesundaram,

    nice you liked it...but for the encouragement i got for my first poem "As i walk through my memories..."i wouldnot have attempted this one...

    thanks for your wishes....
     
  7. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    aruna,

    Thank you
     
  8. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    bala,

    As I said shree, but for encouragement from all of you ....i cant think of trying again....

    Thanks for your words....

    Check out my kab ayenge woh...(Hindi..)
     
  9. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi veda,

    Looks like all those arguments, voracious reading is flowing as scribblings...

    nice that you liked it...Yeah wanted to surprise you also.....
     
  10. Vidya24

    Vidya24 Gold IL'ite

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    Superwoman Shan,

    What will you do next? Sound financial advice in Money Matters, tested marriage counselling, a whole thread praying for others and spreading solace, and now soulful poetry? Are you like ten women posting in one ID? Great poem. I love the sea, and as you have written its inner strength. My husband is working is a maritime industry and we actually revere the sea since it is our bread and butter, annadaatha. So, your poem is especially special to me. Great work, post more.

    regards
    V24
     

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