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Mr. Varalotti's short story in Vaaramalar - Oru Vibathu - Oru Visaranai

Discussion in 'Varalotti Rengasamy's Short & Serial Stories' started by prishen, Oct 3, 2010.

  1. prishen

    prishen Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Sridhar Sir,
    I just got to read your story, "Oru Vibathu - Oru Visaaranai" in this week's vaaramalar. The story line was nice. Very neatly written. I am really happy to give first feedback on your story in Vaaramalar this week. I am a silent reader of your stories in this portal.

    Regards,
    Priya
     
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  2. varalotti

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    Thanks a lot, Priya. do you know something? I came to know of the publication of the story only through your post. I had sent the story long back. Since I did not hear from them I thought the story will not be published. And you gave me the happy news first thing in the morning. May you be blessed.
    Now that you have broken your silence you may continue to comment on all my stories.
    sridhar
     
  3. varalotti

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    Dear All,
    I am enclosing the pdf version of the story for those who don't have access to Varamalar.
    please read the story and let me have your views.
    sridhar
     

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    Read the story Sridhar..
    Idhu ippadi dhaan mudiyum nu ninaichen...very nice. Atleast..after reading this, hopefully if some like-minded people change, it will be a success to this story.

    sriniketan
     
  5. varalotti

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    thanks a lot, Bhargavi. The underlying lesson of the story is that we do good or harm only to ourselves and not to others. At another level there are no "others" in this world.
    When will this corrupt people learn this lesson?
    And one of my professional colleagues called after reading the story. He said that he was totally fed up with corruption as he had to heavily bribe a bureaucrat only yesterday. He told me that he felt like having taken a revenge after reading this story.
    thanks for coming in.
    sridhar
     
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    Dear Uncle,

    "Patta dan theriyum" ngradhu sila paeruku porundhi poidudhu..

    You have written it nicely uncle:cheers
     
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    Dear Raba,
    thanks. yes, I wanted to tell how corruption has been ingrained into our system and even our thinking. And second I wanted to prove that whatever we do to others, good or bad, we do to ourselves.
    thanks for reading the story and for the kind words.
    sridhar uncle
     
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    Dear Sir,
    I am bound to miss this story as I dont know Tamil. I think it must be great coming from your stable. I request you to give us in English so that all your non-Tamil fans in IL can enjoy:thumbsup.
     
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    Very nice story...But what harm did that small boy do other than being born to that crooked man...Feeling really bad...Could not accept it at all...I understand what we give, what we get...But that boy...very sad...
     
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    Varalotti Sir,

    I too read the story in Vaaramalar on Sunday. Your story was good. We expect more stories like this from you.
     

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