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mohabbat kya cheez banayi

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Mar 17, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Saame ho ya ho ankhon se door,utna hi pyar karo..
    Jaise woh rehey har waqt tumhare ankon key samne...
    Koi, kuch na bole , pyar keh jatey hain,
    Koi sab kuch ikraar karke bhi, kuch nah kar pateh hain.
    Wah rey khuda, ajeeb cheez hain yeh mohabbat banayi

    mohabbat karke dekho,samaj aajayegi zindagi,
    kaha hai dilwalon ney, ham kahey zindagi shuru mohabbat se
    Kehtey hai log, duniya bari hai bewafai sey
    hum kehte hain zara,wafa karke aazmalo
    khud jaan jaogey wafa ki seemaiyen

    Hum kehtey hai adaab mohabbat karney walon kho,
    Jo dil khi khubsoorati par jaan detein hain.. Rako apni duniya abaad, muskurate hue...
    hum kahey khuda unkey duniyamein phool khilao...

    Wah rey khuda, mohabbat kya cheez banayi,
     
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  2. Devika Menon

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    Dear Shanvy,

    Wah Wah bahut khub Kya Baat hain! Yeh tho Ishq mein dubey hue premi ka ikraar hain!!

    Ay Insaan thune Zindagi hi kya Ji ,agar tune Mohabbat hi na ki!

    Regards,

    Devika
     
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  3. Shanvy

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    dear devika,

    Shukriya. Hamney mohabbat karke dek liya aur wafa bhi aazmaliye

    isliye ham bhi aapkey saath kehtey hai Ay Insaan thune Zindagi hi kya Ji ,agar tune Mohabbat hi na ki!
     
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    chalo Shanthi..aap achi tharaf likthi hun..Bow
     
  5. poonamjoshi9266

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    Dear Shanti,

    Wah wah Veda ki yadon mein toh tumne achhi shayari likh dali.

    Good, keep posting.
     
  6. Shanvy

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    AC dearie,

    Thank you...shukriya....

     
  7. Shanvy

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    Poonam yaar,

    Shukriya. lekin ek baat kehni thi, hum aise hi kuch likh lete hain..is mein veda khi yadon khi baat kuch nahin hain....:hide:
     
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    Wah wah Shanthi Kya baat hai yaar.
    Kuch hee dinoki baat hai yaar
    Ahbhi say shayari usaki mohabbat mein
    Jo mohabbat karana nahi janatha hai, Kya fiydha usey jikar hesduniya mein
    kahahai yaar tayra mohabbat
    How come he did not go through your poem.
    I thot reading this instead of u going to Oman,
    We will come to know Veda in Chennai.......
    Beautiful wordings. Very nice poem..........
     
  9. poonamjoshi9266

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    Dear Shanti,

    But i must say u write very well that too in hindi.

    good yaar very good.
     
  10. Shanvy

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    Aruna yaar,

    Shukriya, I just write as the mood strikes..iska mathlab yeh nahi I am missing and yearning for veda..(aap log mere sab likaai mein yehi mathlab doondtheho...very bad...Rant)..

    I don't tell him i posted here, he has to find and post a comment...

    maybe he is checking the availability of tickets...bechaara kuch project mein busy hain...

    abhi hum bechaini aur tanhaai key baare mein likh rahe tey..ab hum do baar sochege post karey ya na karein...:coffee
     

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