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Mil Gaye Tum

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Reenae, Nov 5, 2007.

  1. Reenae

    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    zindagi ke safar mein akele thei ham
    mil gae tum to dil ko sahaaraa milaa
    aa gae ik nae raaste par qadam
    jab tumhaarii nazar kaa ishaaraa milaa

    zindagi ko tamannaa thi hamaraaz kii
    saaz-e-dil ko zaruurat thi aavaaz ki
    tumane jab muskuraakar pukaaraa hamen
    zindagi ko khushi kaa nazaaraa milaa

    Aab zamaane kaa Dar hai na duniyaa kaa Gham
    apani taqadiir par naaz karate hain ham
    aaj aankhon ko jalave tumhaare mile
    aaj haathon ko daaman tumhara milaa

    zindagi ke safar mei akele thei ham
    mil gaye tum tou dil ko sahaara mila
     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi reenae,

    good one...

    Jab mil gaye humsafar dilka,
    kya karna mujhe zamane se...
     
  3. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Hi,

    Good one.... Nice....
     
  4. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Life is sweet because of the friends wehave made
    And the things in common we share
    We want to live on,not because of ourselves
    But because of the people who care
    Its giving and loving for someone else
    On this life's splendour depends
    And the joy of it all when usum it allup
    Is found in the making of friends

    Viji
     
  5. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear iyerviji,

    A nice poem on friendship. 'its giving and loving for someone else' could have been 'its giving and living for someone else' , I feel. Also, I don't know why you have posted it here in the thread on a Hindi poem?. Keep writing. All the best.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  6. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear TDU

    Thank u for ur loving advice.

    Remembering u at Diwali
    Although u r far away
    U will be in my every thought
    Each hour of Deepavali day
    I will be wishing u the very best
    Of Luck and lasting cheer
    Enough to keep u gay and glad
    All through the bright New Year

    With best wishes

    Viji
     
  7. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Wow, thank you Iyerviji for your excellent Diwali wish poem. I wish to reciprocate your wishes. Wish you a bright, prosperous and cheerful Diwali.

    Regards,

    TDU
     

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