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meri manzil bata

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Reenae, Nov 1, 2007.

  1. Reenae

    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    yaa meri manzil bata yaa zindagi ko cheen lei
    jiske pichey gham lagey hai us hasi ko cheen lei

    dei nahin sakta agar aaram ka ek saans bhi
    paon mere tod dei awaargi ko cheen lei

    aankh mei aansoo kahan rou dun jo apne haal per
    aagayi jo apne gham per us hasi ko cheen lei
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Reenae you are a good writer ya not bad lovely lines good keep it up
     

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