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  1. Oct 8, 2015 #1
    jskls

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    Colorful leaves dancing
    to the tune of the wind
    Gentle rustling of dry leaves
    beneath the feet
    Sprinklers Watering the
    lush green lawn
    Flowing stream hitting the rocks gently

    Birds chirping
    while searching for food
    Geese honking
    migrating down south
    Busy morning vehicles
    hustling down the road
    Flying airplane across the blue sky

    Music are these to the ears
    when mind Is silent
    Melody it is adding to the rhythm
    A child's loving voice to its mother
     
    jskls, Oct 8, 2015
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  2. Oct 8, 2015 #2
    surekhap

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    nice description of nature @jskls beauty of the nature in beautiful words.:cool2:
     
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    Lathasv

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    Hi Lakshmi :)
    your poem is as natural as nature.True, music to the ears and your's comparison with child's voice to its mother is beautiful.
     
    Lathasv, Oct 8, 2015
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    Wow what a description and what a comparison?Pleasant Music
     
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    Thank you @surekhap, @lathasv, @periamma for your lovely feedback. I just shared the beauty of the nature that captured my senses as I was walking from the parking lot to work... As I was observing these sounds suddenly the thought of my children calling me came and that's when I wrote this...
     
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    Keen observations fall into our eyes and ears, when our mind is silent. True @jskls. Neat descriptions!
     
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    Thankyou Latha.
     
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    You have recreated that experience again through your narration...nice wordings..
     
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    Thank you. Glad you liked it
     
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    Thank you for sharing! It is a pleasure to read.
     
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