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I will be posting next episode till today evening.
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“That’s not important. This is jeera soda, after having it you will feel better.”He holds the beverage bottle in front.
Anushka nodded to no & started going from there.
“Don’t be stubborn Anushka, have this drink.” He said.
Anushka wanted to tease him again. With angry face” I said Na, I don’t want it. Don’t force me.”
“Anushka are you fasting for Vatpournima?” he asked straight away.
But she was still not ready to give up. She shrugged off her shoulders & turned opposite side.
“No I am not. Nothing will happen to me if I sleep empty stomach. I will relief from it. Today I ate heavy snacks in office, so stomach is paining. That’s it. And I have decided to move ahead from this relation so there is no question of fasting.”
Adish was shaken for a moment but he saw her reflection in glass of window. She was smiling.
Ad: OK, one minute……….
He went in kitchen & soon returned within few seconds carrying a Dairy Milk. He broke one piece of it & holds in front of her. “If you are not fasting then eat this chocolate.”
He understood the truth!
Now Anushka was in trap. She had nothing to say & just stood there as such.
Adish pulled her towards himself clutching her hand & kissed her on right cheek.
Adish released her & said “See I have moved ahead already now it’s your turn. I also got this greeting card of yours. “
Everything happened so swiftly that it took a moment for her to realize it.Her face soon turned pink & she looked down shying.
Anushka silently looked in his eyes. He gave a teasing stare. She withdrew her gaze & ran in bedroom. Adish chased her but she quickly closed bedroom door & locked it at once. She rested her back on door & recollected whatever he said, his kiss on cheek & his teasing stares. She smiled alone.
“Anushka, please open the door yaar, I want to talk to you,” he shouted.
Anushka grinned looking at the closed door. Adish frowned lied on the sofa in hall. He fall a sleep within some time.
Here Anushka draped a beautiful baby pink color chiffon saree. On that a brocade golden backless blouse, light touch up completed her look.
Adish got up after some time with the sound of something. At first he couldn’t understand anything due to half sleep. He looked around & remembered whatever happened few minutes ago, his lips parted with a smile. He started searching for Anushka. But where she is?
He found bedroom door open. “Anushka… where are you?” He came calling her & stood there thunderstruck seeing her standing in balcony back facing watching out.
Pink saree draped with single fleet, green bangles, and her open hair was playing with wind. She was looking prettier never than earlier.
Anushka realized his presence & her heart started beating fast.
That moment Adish saw something on bed.
A banyan tree leaf containing pieces of five fruits was kept on bed.
That means Anushka fasted for me!
He moved close to her, Anushka turned to him. She gave an intimate look & he was finished.
“You didn’t answer my question Anushka. Why did you fast today? I mean you only told me na we will live like room mates” he said with a naughty grin.
She was no less. “So, I am Still OK with that.” Saying she started going from there widening her eyes with a fake anger.
Ad: Anushka…….. Your blouse’s button is opened.
Anushka stopped with her his words. Scared for moment, she checked it with her both hands but it was perfect.
An: don’t lie, it’s not open……..
Before she could complete sentence Adish captured her holding her waist. Her hands remained locked on her back as they were covered by his hands.
“Shall I open it?” He asked biting his lower lip.
Anushka froze as hands touched her half bare waist. She couldn’t meet his stare.
“Adi……..” she softly whispered & kept her head on his shoulder.
He was amazed that first time she called him Adi. He cupped her face with his hands & kissed on her neck.
“Yes, I fasted for my husband; there was no special day to tell you that I love you,” her voice become emotional, while going aside she picked up the banyan tree leaf & gave him.
“Anu…..” Adish again pulled her towards himself with hand & kept the leaf aside. He hold her face in his palms, she felt his hot breath everywhere on her cheeks, necks.
Adish gave her a deep kiss; Anushka closed her eyes as she waited long for this moment.
“You don’t need make up Anushka; I can make your face pink any time like just now,”
Anushka’s face was reddened, blushed she pushed him aside & but Adish lifted her holding her waist & gently kept on bed. She blossomed as his hands touched her bare back. She felt a tugging sensation at the clasp on her back. Her blouse’s knot was untied. Adish lost his control seeing her quietly responding & blushing. He turned her towards his direction.
He gave a more intimate look as if trying to discover each others soul. The climate too supported them & it started raining. Looking at him felt a bit like staring over the edge of a cliff. Anushka looked out from glass of bedroom’s window to avoid it. His hands tied on her back now moved towards her saree’s fleet. He asked through his eyes whether he can go ahead. Anushka hugged him tightly. With her silent approval his fingers slid on her neck sending a spark of electricity down her spine. As she felt his breath on her lips, she sank into the warmth of the kiss with a sigh.
Every bit of her body was aroused with his first touch that too months after their marriage. Her bangles sound encouraged them. Sometime feelings are deep hidden inside heart. But when the two bodies meet, they melt and come out. Same happened with Adish –Anushka .That time Anushka saw an immense love for herself in his eyes. The night was not enough for them to love each other.
In the morning Anushka found herself sleeping in Adish’s arms .she beamed in happiness. Her mobile screamed with morning alarm of 6.30 am. She switched it off & got up to complete morning chores. Adish was awakened; he pulled her close & kissed. “Adi.. You idiot, let me go” Anushka somehow managed to escaped from his embrace & ran in bathroom.
A new chapter called love was going to make their life beautiful.
After two days.
An: Hi Pari….
Pari was surprised seeing the happiness on Anushka’s face. Finally they united!
P: Somebody is looking happy. Is it due to love?
Anushka’s face shone with her comments. She hugged Pari.
To Be Continued...........
Ultimate romantic episode.this is Atlast they United. Yeah... . You are a real romantic queen dear. I read the episodes thrice. Ummmmaaaa to you for this long waited episode. Happy to take the pride to give my first like and comment to you dear.
Happy that they both finally united. You wrote the episode very subtly. Love it
Waiting for Pari's story now
OMG..Censor cut! .. Oh boy! I dont know what to say leenam...Finally Adish became hero here..now Pari's and Ved's turn!
I really want to comment for all episodes of yours but got busy with few thing's.
Anyways,this was an ultimate romantic episode and for sure all of us following this snippet were eagerly waiting for this ...
Such a wonderful narration and I read it thrice..
Simply awesome... ☺️
Most awaited moment of the series!!
Its not two months @leenam05 ji its three years Finally they gave an end to their hide & seek cool and romantic epi Wish pari and ved are blessed to exchange their love proposal Before pari takes some decision!! thank you for such lovely updates. waiting to see what happens with P Vs V.
@leenam05 eagerly waiting for next episode.