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Love Marriage & Arranged Marriage - Friendship Vs Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Apr 8, 2016.

  1. Rihana

    Rihana Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Punctual? Like the train? :)

    Good start. Curious about what will happen next.
     
  2. IniyaaSri

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    Thanks sweetee darling!! :):):)
     
  3. IniyaaSri

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    Hey thanks for your feedback Rihana!! :)
    Very happy to see that!!
    And yeah hopefully punctual dear ;-)
     
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    Nicely captured feelings of entering into a foreign country. I felt the same when I first entered US, I almost cried as I could not understand English also first one week, slowly I started understanding their accent.
     
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    Yeah dear!! It takes time anyways to get accustomed to it!! :)
     
  6. IniyaaSri

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    Before she could think about the girl’s courtesy, the girl said

    “Hi, am Mary! This is the first time you are travelling abroad?”

    “Yes” Rachna replied with a formal smile..

    Mary gave many documents to Keshav and he was filling all those. Rachna was simply watching them.

    “Please come.. I will show your house”

    Rachna and Keshav followed her. Mary was quite fair, typical Japanese height, a high messy pony tail, brownish hair, not so Japanese eyes, a nice round face and looked really beautiful in her black trousers and a casual white woolen top.

    She is smiling too much… Though her white teeth looks good.. Why is she smiling this much… Uff….

    Smiling is a problem or she smiling at your husband is your problem? Rachna’s inner voice blinked..

    Mary opened a locked door and showed the house.

    Rachna was impressed with the wooden furnishing… There was a big dining area integrated with the kitchen..Two big rooms and of course the wash area aside..That’s it.. That was their beautiful home to live…

    Mary taught them how to use the Japanese water heater in the bathroom, how to use the available gas stove, the Japanese washing machine and she was done with her assigned duty.

    “Ok.. am leaving… In case of any doubts, do let me know.”

    “And Welcome to Japan” – Mary gave her trademark wide smile displaying her beautiful white teeth.

    Seeing her leave, Keshav said “Arigatou Gozaimashta” (Thank you) and bowed to her.

    “Ariii….” Let it be whatever… Rachna again smirked at him knowing he wont see her..

    Rachna admires their new Japanese house… Two rooms and a dining room combined with kitchen…a wide balcony… Its was perfect for a couple. She ran to the balcony.. she could see multiple train tracks and trains…

    Then she opened the bathroom door and peeped in..

    That bathroom was slightly smaller than the usual Indian bathroom size but it had a big heater, a small square bathtub in which hardly one person can MANAGE to sit with their legs crossed..

    “What is this?!! Bath tub?” asked Rachna

    Keshav peeped in standing behind her and said “yes!! Almost all houses will have this bath tub”

    “Oh” her reply was continued by Keshav “They fill the water and sit relaxed for hours and then the same water will be used by other people as well”

    “What?!!!!” – Rachna's eyes became bigger…

    Keshav dnt bother to reply her this time.. He was busy arranging his clothes…

    Both arranged all their basic belongings. It was time for dinner.

    “Take that tamarind paste”... said Keshav in a serious tone

    “Yeah.. Rice is ready”… Rachna replied

    Rachna blended the tamarind paste and rice and gave him in a paper plate.. Both had their dinner and Keshav took his tab and went to bed..

    Rachna arranged the few basic groceries she brought and went to bed..

    She saw him playing games and she lied beside him… Don’t know when she slept…

    Neither he spoke nor she spoke.. No talks except a good night wish…

    Rachna was in deep sleep and she felt as if Keshav has kissed her…

    She woke up with a shock….

    “Did he kiss me really?!!!”

    Or its just a dream…?

    She slowly tried to open her half sleepy eyes…

    She opened her eyes and she felt his body….

    She saw that he was lying too close to her… and his hand on her stomach….

    “Did he really kiss me?!!”

    “How can that happen..?!!”
     
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    What is this twist ?? What's the back ground?? Good going iniyasree..
    PS
     
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    Thanks dear :) :) :)
     
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    Ini... Superb episode, i really liked this episode a lot.

    What????????????????????? same is my reaction as Rachna.
    the story so far has so many unknown knots, arousing my curiosity so much, rite from the title i wud say, friendship vs love arranged marriage vs love marriage, is Keshav n rachna the only pair or we r going to have another pair as well to suit the second part of ur title, suspense suspense. This time suspense in the title itself a?

    Wats with Rachna and Keshav? tell me tell me, see the stupid me want to know the end in the beginning itself:tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy:

    as usual the narration is superb.
     
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    Nice episode asusual.thinking what might be the twist
     

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