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Love Marriage & Arranged Marriage - Friendship Vs Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Apr 8, 2016.

  1. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you so much Geetashree :blush::blush::blush:
    Am pleased seeing your comment on my story:blush::blush:
    Thanks a ton for taking time and writing a comment! :grinning:
    Have a wonderful day ahead:thumbup:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Deva :)
    Am totally delighted reading your words :blush::blush::blush:
    It was just my second attempt in story writing and when you say you felt as if you lived the character, what else I need :blush::blush::blush:
    Thanks a ton for giving that beautiful feeling :blush:
    Thank you so much once again dear :blush:
    You can read my first story too when time permits! Thanks :blush:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi NamrataSoni!!! :blush::blush::blush:
    Thank you so much for reading my story! :blush:
    Happy that you liked :blush:
    Have a good day! :blush:
     
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    Vey nice story you have written. I started reading it yesterday and finished reading it today. Loved the story the characters and also how crisp and brief the episodes were you did not drag them even once. Very well written and full of info. Thanks for sharing. I especially liked how positive the characters were and only looked at the positive things happening in their lives.. I learned few lessons too as I only focus on negative experiences. This story has given me a direction to think on positive lines. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. I never explored this section of IL ( read you're missing in my heart story before reading this but found it to draaaaggg unnecessarily) but will keep an eye out for your stories now on :*
     
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    Hey dear!

    Thank you so much for such a detailed comment!!! :blush:
    You made my day! :blush:
    Very happy that my story headed towards positive things!
    I always try to give a positive feel to the readers. Happy that you enjoyed!
    And this story is my second attempt in story writing.
    My first attempt was "Golden moments of Life" - One more love story
    If the story keeps you hooked, you shall read and let me know your thoughts on that too!
    And am not a story writer by the way! Everything are just my attempts!:blush: and am happy to read such positive comments for my attempts.
    Thanks once again for making my day!!!:blush::blush::blush:
    Have a wonderful day ahead! :blush:
     
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    Angellic IL Hall of Fame

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    Awesome ...Enjoyed reading your story. Im traveling, and my train traveling never go without me getting glued into books. Finished two of my books , luckily saw your story , read it in one go. Rachna's character resembles my nature alot ;) very beautifully narrated, I loved the way the story plot moved shifting back and forth. I m someone who look for happy ending, happy ever after, I wish you gave an happy ending to madhav as well. I was expecting pooja to stand for madhav. Till the end I was expecting a twist from pooja. Though u made it quite practical but would've been complete if madhav too had a happy ending...
     
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    Hey Angellic,
    Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my story! :blush::blush::blush:
    Very Happy that you enjoyed:grinning:
    I see :smile::smile::smile: Then you can relate well. lol.
    Hmmm.. A couple of friends mentioned it. But now when you say, my mind is pondering over that. Since I try to give a natural tone in all my stories, I thought there might be many such Madhavs who would have vanished. And I want the readers to decide whatever they want. Positively we can think that since he started business for Pooja, he might have work harded and become a business tycoon someday:thumbsup:

    Anyway am very pleased that you shared your thoughts and opinions here.
    Thank you so much once again:blush::blush::blush:
    Very happy am!
    Hugs to you :blush: Have a fantastic day ahead!:blush:
     
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    Psurya New IL'ite

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    Hey.. read this story.. and superb one.. u just capturing the emotions in excellent way.. it keeps us hooked up to the story.

    Thanks for the story.. and keep up the good work.
     
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    Hey thank you so much for reading this story as well! :blush::blush:
    Happy that you liked and thats very kind of you for writing a feedback!
    Thanks once again! :blush:
    Have a lovely day!!!
     

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