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Love Marriage & Arranged Marriage - Friendship Vs Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Apr 8, 2016.

  1. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    My Beautiful ladies here!! This is my second attempt in story writing. Am really not sure how this is going to be!! So read it without any expectations!! Lets see how it has come!! :)

    Episode 1

    Rachna was trying to see outside the windows and she was seeing the bright white clouds….The flight windows dnt allow her to put her head out and they were standing like a tall mountain with her head pressed against it…

    “The clouds hangs like this..? I have seen clouds crawling on the mountains… but to see the clouds from an aircraft is too different….Am I really flying above the clouds?!!! Am I flying in such an altitude…. Scary… “

    But she couldn’t take her eyes off from the clouds… She was taking pictures from her mobile but stopped as it was too boring to click the same clouds again and again.. But she couldn’t stop from looking outside….She stopped at once when she saw a couple smiling at her…

    “oops..Am I acting like a small kid…? These people are smiling at me…. Hey Rachna don’t show that you have boarded an international flight for the very first time in your life… Act like you have come for many times… You see… I have travelled many times.. and this is not the first time…. I think this is my 28th time… no no 14th time…. Uff… what am I doing… Rachna stops your showoffs… You are bad at acting and you know that… hmmmm…fine.. let me start watching movie now…”

    Rachna was wearing a black stretchable jean and an orangish t shirt…. Her round face was slightly chubby.. typical Indian wheatish complexion…Her dark black hair was tied into a ponytail…Over all she is a good looking 26 years old girl.. Girl?! Or I should say she is a woman just because she is married..?

    She puts her big head set on her ears and browses through the movies that were available.. She saw her regional language movie…. I have already seen this 20 times..

    She saw an Italian movie… wooooo… the title says it’s a love story… Let me watch.. Even I watch foreign movies you see.. not just the Indian masalas… thinking this, she chuckled to herself…. She started watching the movie…

    The hero and heroine falls in love… they start a family and they are a beautiful family with their son… Suddenly one day, the heroine forgets all the past memories and heads into a different direction … The heroine and the son long for her .. try to find her.. and the climax was the heroine falls in love with him once again though she doesn’t remember being in a married life with him already..

    Wow!!! Even if the memory gets deleted.. the soul mates are pre written and they will fall for the same again …. Woo….what a love story… she was in her own dream world..

    Nice movie….She turned her head and saw Keshav was busy watching an action movie. He dnt even turn towards her for the past 3 hours..

    She smirked at him knowing he wont see her for sure…

    “Am his wife..Does he remembers this or not?” She frowned..

    some or the other action films..Silly man… she thought..

    The flight landed…

    “Rachna take your hand bag… Don’t forget…” saying this Keshav took all their hand luggages from the loft….

    “I wont forget…” Rachna wore her handbag.

    She saw an old lady with a pop cut.. Rachna made sure that she doesn’t stare at the lady.. Staring at others is rude.. her inner voice popped. She tried to look at the lady casually.. She would be more than 75.. She was holding a hand mirror and was busy applying a dark red lipstick… Rachu raised her eye brows slightly but tried to act as if she dnt notice the lady..

    Rachna and Keshav got down from the flight.. Rachna wore her long thick jacket…She sensed good chillness in the air. Keshav went to enquire about the train route from the airport and Rachna was staring at everyone in the new country and yes it is the land of Rising Sun…

    And here are the links to all the episodes in this story:

    Episode 1

    Episode 2

    Episode 3

    Episode 4

    Episode 5


    Episode 6

    Episode 7

    Episode 8

    Episode 9

    Episode 10


    Episode 11

    Episode 12

    Episode 13

    Episode 14

    Episode 15

    Episode 16

    Episode 17

    Episode 18


    Episode 19

    Episode 20

    Episode 21

    Episode 22


    Episode 23

    Episode 24

    Episode 25

    Episode 26

    Episode 27

    Episode 28

    Episode 29

    Episode 30

    Episode 31

    Episode 32

    Episode 33

    Episode 34

    Episode 35

    Episode 36

    Episode 37

    Episode 38

    Episode 39

    Episode 40

    Episode 41

    Episode 42

    Episode 43

    Episode 44

    Episode 45


    Episode 46

    Episode 47

    Episode 48

    Episode 49

    Episode 50
     
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  2. Lata6

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    Finally, you got convinced!! So good to see a second one from you! I am
    Excited! And I am
    Feeling great to leave my first comment here. Land of Rising Sun, is it your story???

    You kick started the story really well and would like to travel with you in your story writing journey!!! GOOD LUCK.. Waiting for future episodes
     
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  3. IniyaaSri

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    Thanks for the feedback Lata sweety!! :) Your feedback brought a smile on my face! And no this cant be my story!! lol!!! Just trying to sprinkle few things about the land of rising sun here and there!! lets see how the story moves!! :) Thanks for the wishes dear :blush:
     
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    Ini..... U r back, sumhow after ur first story got over, I was missing you. U r so sweet to not make us wait for a long time.

    Atleast i was able to give the first like though not the comment.

    That was an awesome start.
    Gud one, i really liked these lines, in the lighter note then there is no escapism even if we get memory loss, oh my gawdddddd.:tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy:

    ha ha ha ha,Got me reminded of my memories with my friends once in a theatre.

    Oru paisa selavu illama japana suthi kaamikka poringa, ha ha now i understood y u gave the hint of living in japan in ur previous story:p
     
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    "there is no escapism even if we get memory loss, oh my gawdddddd.:tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy:"

    Laughing heavily reading this!! You can take it that way too :lol::lol::lol:

    "Oru paisa selavu illama japana suthi kaamikka poringa, ha ha now i understood y u gave the hint of living in japan in ur previous story:p"

    And regarding this when I said, I dnt even have the idea of writing the new story girl!!! :tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy::tearsofjoy:
    Now only even am thinking that!! Aaamaaa laa..... :flushed::flushed::smile::smile:
    What a coincidence!! :openmouth: Vidhi valiyadhu... :tearsofjoy:
     
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    Wow. Japanil Rachna va. Super super. :treadmill:
     
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    ha ha ha tat was a gud one, japanil namma ellarum, Ini punniyathula:joycat:
     
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    Checking swthrt!! Tanku!!
    Adhu dhaan enna nu paathukittu iruken!!
     
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    :smile::smile::smile::smile::smile:
     
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