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Love...gone wrong....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Oct 16, 2014.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Your looks are deceiving....
    Smile is imitating...
    Eyes are mesmerizing...
    Words are paralyzing...
    Ears are chandelling...
    Feelings fluctuating...
    Mind contemplating...
    Intentions misleading...
    Love was just for the time being....
    No more is it enchanting...
    Foolish I was to think, you
    Were the one I was seeking....
     
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  2. GoogleGlass

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    Love didn't go wrong but the person went wrong...

    Ears are deaf
    Eyes are blind
    Mouths are dumb
    Organs go paralyzed
    Love is a drug definitely
    Those that rehabilitate from
    Ill-effects turn to be a success

    Nice one S7
     
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    very nice ....s7 n GG
     
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    Hey GG...thanks
     
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    Thank you Uma...
     
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    Aahaa!
    potti bayangara balama poittuirukke?

    GG, thank your "guru S7", who brought out that dormant poetic talents of yours.

    so, S7, it is just infatuation, not love!

    very good S7, short and sweet.

    you pulled (not the leg?) GG into writing poetry during an auspicious(?) time, i think!
    see, sir is coming with poetry after poetry and that too, responses also poetic.
     
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    Lovely comments KV...thank you :)
    Yes now GG has to give me "Guru Dakshinina" for invoking and unleashing his new skill;-)....now he will post and I will take a break :)
     
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    thank you US
     
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    lol

    she definitely deserves one from my side - reading mine what others give will be shared - good to her and criticism to me :)
     
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    with out saying it is all yours.

    when the skill, kills their reading instincts - supply pills please :)
     
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