1. Have an Interesting Snippet to Share : Click Here
    Dismiss Notice

Love at first sight....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Nov 3, 2014.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,877
    Likes Received:
    2,311
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female


    It was love at first sight for me...
    Feeling butterflies in my stomach,
    And torching my eyes, when I happened
    To see thee...
    Words fumbling, hands trembling...
    In love I went down tumbling...

    Took a long time to muster courage, and
    To befriend you...once that happened,
    It was journey travelled, like a cakewalk
    That can never be forgotten....
    Every single day was a pleasure
    Seeing you, life could not have been better
    Than this...I was in total bliss....

    Still remember the day you said
    "I love you"....
    Still remember the first kiss from you...
    Tender was our age, sparks of love...
    Flaring with rage...
    Promises made to last for long....
    But destiny interrupted this song...

    Times changed, places rearranged...
    New tasks kept us engaged...
    Days turned to weeks, weeks to years...
    But still your my first love, my dear...
    Reminders of a life gone by still exists...
    Traces of love hidden away in the mist....

    Love was blind, deaf and dumb...
    Keeps me glued to you at times, making
    My nerves and senses go numb...
    Time stands still even now...for you
    Will I my head bow...
    Being together is not always important...
    Don't wish to let my thoughts torment...

    It was love at first sight for me...
    I once basked in glory...you are
    My "Honey Bee"
     
    7 people like this.
    Loading...

  2. umasivasankar

    umasivasankar IL Hall of Fame

    Messages:
    2,021
    Likes Received:
    4,948
    Trophy Points:
    300
    Gender:
    Female
    nice one scorpio, loved to read it
     
  3. kalpavriksham

    kalpavriksham Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    884
    Likes Received:
    473
    Trophy Points:
    138
    Gender:
    Female
    my, my, my!
    reserve some love for us too madaam???!!!!

    what happened to my kids?
    first it was GG.
    now it is S7
    Parini and DR
    ever.!!!!

    may be i am too old for all these glittery things of life!!

    sorry, S7, just kidding you, hoping u wont mind the same.

    Just like your other poem on H&W relationship,
    this is also very tender.
    you have emoted beautifully!
     
    1 person likes this.
  4. ammulur

    ammulur Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,530
    Likes Received:
    2,279
    Trophy Points:
    290
    Gender:
    Female
    Good One Scorpio, Love At First Sight : All's Well Which Ends Well.
     
    1 person likes this.
  5. santoshini

    santoshini Silver IL'ite

    Messages:
    279
    Likes Received:
    64
    Trophy Points:
    68
    Gender:
    Female
    hi scorpio
    first love or first crush are always memorable.
    that's a lovely one from you
     
    1 person likes this.
  6. deepthiraj

    deepthiraj Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,261
    Likes Received:
    3,545
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female
    Times changed, places rearranged...
    New tasks kept us engaged...
    Days turned to weeks, weeks to years...
    But still your my first love, my dear...

    Touching lines.......Nice one yaar.....Keep writing..... :)
     
    1 person likes this.
  7. GoogleGlass

    GoogleGlass IL Hall of Fame

    Messages:
    5,711
    Likes Received:
    22,529
    Trophy Points:
    470
    Gender:
    Male
    Nice one S7.

    Ditto first time pick pocket experience / pick heart experience :)
     
    2 people like this.
  8. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,877
    Likes Received:
    2,311
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female
    Thank you Uma...
     
  9. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,877
    Likes Received:
    2,311
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female
    Love has no age KV :) never think that way....it is eternal..like they say age/caste/religion - no bar :wink:...
    Thanks for your comments, glad you liked it....
     
  10. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,877
    Likes Received:
    2,311
    Trophy Points:
    283
    Gender:
    Female
    Ammulur...thank you for continuing to read and commenting on most of my posts..
     

Share This Page