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Lord's Last Declaration

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  1. Apr 14, 2012 #1
    Bpremalatha

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    Signals floating from up above the sky on the earth,
    There stands the lord, here me kneeling in mirth,

    Confused the heavenly lord, to bless or crush,
    Smiling with keen eyes, Stares at him with a wish,

    Wish to find the proof of confusion in lord's sparkling eye,
    The master of all, slashes his shawl swirled hands in style,

    Thee Lord now utters his words, with thunder,
    You were my mistake, comeback to your master,

    comeback charm comeback!!!!
     
    Bpremalatha, Apr 14, 2012
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  2. Apr 18, 2012 #2
    rgsrinivasan

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    It only takes a god to call his 'mistake' as 'charm'. Isn't it Premalatha? Waiting for that moment is always a bit unnerving. If only we have the courage..... Made me think a lot like this madam. Nice to read. Thanks. -rgs
     
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  3. Apr 21, 2012 #3
    Bpremalatha

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    Thanks RGS for the comments
    I was imagining about an old person, who is not satisfied with the way he/she led the life... on his death bed....
    So this lines came out.. :)
     
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  4. Apr 27, 2012 #4
    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Prema,

    It was really a wonderful one.... gives lot of food for thoughts...

    I really don't know how I missed this piece for such a long time...

    Keep them coming :)
     
    Lalitha Shivaguru, Apr 27, 2012
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  5. Apr 27, 2012 #5
    Bpremalatha

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    Thanks lalitha
     
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  6. May 7, 2012 #6
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    Hi Prema...
    If you dont mind I would like to point if that is the case then the person wont be in mirthful state when he sees Lord right.... This is bit ambiguous here
     
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    Bpremalatha

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    Hmm VJ.. not sure.. He is mirthful as he sees god's confused face :D :D
     
    Bpremalatha, May 12, 2012
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