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Loneliness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Rajiv, Jun 10, 2016.

  1. Rajiv

    Rajiv Gold IL'ite

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    This is a poem about a person who is alone and feels lonely. I have written it in the perspective of him talking to the plants and trees present in the garden.

    I sit in the lawn

    Every day at Dawn

    Just to speak with you

    Just to be with you.


    I sit in the Garden

    During the dusk

    To watch the Shining leaves

    Which reflects my feelings


    When I see the dew

    I forget my tears

    I wish to sit here and

    Watch it for years.


    It is love

    All that matters,

    Which makes our life

    So Very better.


    There are so many people

    Yet I feel lonely

    No one to love, care

    Everyone is being unfair.


    There is no one for me

    At least will you be?

    I will Love and care

    Be with me ever.
     
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  2. GoogleGlass

    GoogleGlass IL Hall of Fame

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    gud one.

    but i see it as a the rehearsal that is shortly awaiting to be presented to the one and only one :)
     
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  3. Rajiv

    Rajiv Gold IL'ite

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    thanks...no no no...not going to be presented to any one...
     
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    GoogleGlass IL Hall of Fame

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    lol

    love is a war of tenses
    experience in the past tense
    holds or pushes in the present tense
    to realize and never to be forgotten in the future tense
     
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    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Good one!. Some like to be alone to just talk to leaves and trees.
     
  6. PoojaShah

    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    Really good.
    Felt sorry for the guy.
     
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  7. Rajiv

    Rajiv Gold IL'ite

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    watte wow of the watermelon....
     
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  8. Rajiv

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    thank you...
     
  9. PoojaShah

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    Watermelon?? Am I missing something?
     
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    Good one, described well!
     

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