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Life

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mistt, Jun 24, 2021.

  1. Mistt

    Mistt IL Hall of Fame

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    Life is like a novel
    We open the novel enthusiastically
    Characters introduced one by one

    Some chapters were joyful
    Some chapters were dissatisfied
    Some chapers were blessed

    Some characters cheered us up
    Some characters taught lessons
    Some characters are only meant
    to stay in our life

    Count our blessings
    Treasure the good memories
    Let go of toxic feelings/persons
    Remember insights
    Turn to the next page with a smile:)
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    A new passion
    @Mistt discovered in herself
    It was latent
    Like a dormant volcano
    Now found cause
    To erupt like Mount Etna
    Been to Italy I guess
    Began musings about Life
    For some life is in files
    For few it is in novels
    For view it is in moral books
    For @Mistt it is characters in novel
    Am glad she found
    Nuggets for others
    To live life at ease
    Keep counting past blessings
    Turn to life every minute
    With experience or and insight
    Gained in the past
    Kudos to poet in you
    Am sure you produce & post here
    More and more anthology
    God Bless.
     
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  3. Mistt

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    It isn't new passion but I kept my random thoughts inside me only. Now, May be I get a courage to pen my views. Thank you Sir for your support and wishes.
     
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    Awesome poem .I thought you were good at clicking but found that you are a good poet.
    Bring your hidden talents out

    Writing a snippet is easy but putting our thoughts in.apoem is not so easy
     
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    I tend to agree.
    Poem has its own grammar.
    poems often have a distinct meter and rhyme.

    For many poets, it is somewhat easy to pen poems in their mother tongue which offers easy felicity to bring in the right most apt words to get the power of expression in lyrics. But to translate those poems or thoughts into a poem in another language requires understanding the nuances of the other language.

    It is difficult with choice of words, maintains the structure of original thought in mother tongue , meter & rhyme and other constraints.

    Thanks & Regards.
     
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  6. Mistt

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    Thanks Viji maa for your Feedback. As a personality of introvert I just keep all my feelings/thoughts inside me only. Somehow, I plucked up courage to put my feelings on words and post them on IL.
     
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    I couldn't agree more. It is so easy to write poetry in telugu for me as I have vast knowledge in telugu vocabulary. I definitely give credit to good telugu lyrical songs.
     
  8. iyerviji

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    The poem is super
     
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