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Discussion in 'Kids Korner' started by iyerviji, Feb 11, 2008.

  1. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    This poem was written by my son when he was in XII Std

    Life is filled with sorow and joy
    Does not matter if you are agirl or a boy

    Even if you have money and power
    There is always a person compared to whom u are lower

    You struggle and struggle to more money make
    But u forget that its your life at stake

    In the end when you achieve your goal and happiness cry
    A bell rings to tell you that its your turn to die

    You realise your struggle was nothing but a waste
    For you could not even give your success a little taste

    You die with a heart which is broken to pieces
    And all your success goes to your nephews and nieces

    So my friends you shoud earn only to feed your hunger
    Not to become richer and make the poor poorer

    We shoud remember that our brethren dont even get necessities
    While we dwell in comforts and luxuries
     
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  2. Meenaneelakantan

    Meenaneelakantan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Viji ma'am

    Wonderful poem conveying a good message!!:clap:clap

    Love
    Meena
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    hello Viji
    Nice wordings. has he stopped writting now and in which class is he now......
    Encourage him to write and congrats to him for this poem
     
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    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi viji,

    That is a very beautiful poem. Though I know from your other posts that he is now very busy, ask him to write more, as it could be fulfilling to him.
     
  5. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Aruna

    Thanks. Now he is working. He is 30 years old now. He is a Director in a Company.
    After B.Com he did C..A. Now he has no time to write.

    viji

     
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    Dear Shanthi

    Thanks. I will convey your message tohim.

    Love

    Viji


     
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    Dear Meena

    Thanks

    Love

    Viji


     
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    Nice philosophy from a 12th standard student!:clap who thinks 'podhum yendra manamae ponn seiyum marundhu', in the last lines.

    Ask him to write more and let him keep it as a hobby to ease put his tensions.

    sriniketan
     

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