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Let's Fly High

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Sep 23, 2024.

  1. RatnaMalliswari

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    Let's fly high
    Where shall we fly?
    Up above the sky and
    We go hand in hand

    Let's fly high
    Is it not pitch black?
    pin your faith on me
    I will uplift you and
    We shall fly by crescent moon

    Let's fly high
    Will crescent moon take us?
    Yes my lady love
    I opened my heart
    I said,I yearn for you

    Let's fly high
    Is anything special?
    Its my wish
    to make you feel over the moon

    Let's fly high
    But why all this?
    Because,
    I love you to moon and back
    I want to marry you

    Let's fly high
    Will you marry me? My Beau
    Yes my lady love
    I never knew
    When our romance
    Led to altar.

    Regards
    Ratna
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    As a poem, I shall award five stars for it.
    2. It is nostalgic in the sense that one would remember the old historical or and mythological movies where romance lifted to higher planes like they travel in space standing over moving clouds.
    3. It ransported my mind to Raja Rani and puranic romance where they are shown sitting tight on crescent or swinging crescent. I remember multi talented late actress Padmasri Bhanumathi and Anjali Devi in such movies sitting on crescent and glide with the hero.
    4. Why they- the lovers- seek solitude at high as altitude away from planet earth and why they play romance where no food no water no wash no of many things!
    5. The crescent moon is nicely associated with romantic evening, stroll under the stars, and intimate conversations.( In ancient times, lovers would often write letters under the light of the crescent moon.)

    The crescent moon is sometimes used as a symbol for proposals, representing a bright future together.
     
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    Hello @Thyagarajan Sir
    I saw crescent moon few nights ago and a thought pondered in my mind, finally I could plot in poetry.
    A poetry that could receive 5 stars from wordsmith whom I know as @Thyagarajan Sir.
    I am feeling happy, Thank you for your wonderful feedback.keeping reading my post and give your feedback.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    It is great to know that you could find time to observe night sky. People busy 24x7 never look at he night sky especially in urban cities living in skypscrapers.
    If you had witnessed the crescent on day third from ammavasya, it is supposed to augur well . In Tamil it is called (மூன்றாம் பிறை) moonram Pirai. Famous title of Tamil movie dubbed in Telugu as Vasantha Kokila.
     
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    Hello @Thyagarajan Sir
    I do spend some time at my terrace,I have many plants.I love nature and I believe Sun and Moon are the natural gods.
    I guess Vasantha Kokila is sadma,nice movie Ilayaraja musical hit.
    Thank you for spending your valuable time and giving feedback.
    Regards
    Ratna
     

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