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Let us a pick up a pen to pen some Cinquain poems - A five line peom

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Poetlatha, May 26, 2015.

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  1. May 27, 2015 #31
    mimmyme

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    Rain
    Lovely droplets
    To wet the world
    In its love with earth
    Green Earth
     
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  2. May 27, 2015 #32
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    Expectation
    Greediness, unsettledness
    Remove your peace
    Doing duty without expectations
    Enlightenment
     
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    Mind,
    Restless, quiet
    Discontent like monkey
    Jumping thoughts to thoughts
    intellect
     
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  4. May 27, 2015 #34
    mimmyme

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    Stone
    Rigid, Strong
    Speaking, murmuring, crying
    It stood there as astounding as she was
    Pavement...
     
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  5. May 27, 2015 #35
    Poetlatha

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    @mimmyme, now you have become pro, loved each and every one of them....continue writing and create a blog or maintain a journal! @Rohanj mind blowing one, good, @girvani, awesome...! Friends always have your own copies too, either manuscript or print version. I assume you all must be typing directly, so either copy and paste into another personal blog or note down in a journal. Good job!
     
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  6. May 27, 2015 #36
    Poetlatha

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    @Angellic, both your poems are awesome, keep writing, please make sure you have personal copies of all you write. Lovely, thanks for writing and sharing! Great keep it flowing!
     
    Poetlatha, May 27, 2015
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  7. May 27, 2015 #37
    rgsrinivasan

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    Questions
    Everywhere Aplenty
    Not all answered
    Yet good to have,
    Kids!
     
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  8. May 27, 2015 #38
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    God
    Great belief,
    A few hate
    Questioning the very existence
    First!
     
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    You nailed it !!
     
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    Poetlatha

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    @rgsrinivasan, Sir, lovely lovely both are so good! One on Child and another on God, two great themes of life!
     
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