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Lament Of A Soul

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunkan, Feb 6, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    [FONT=&quot]love stays away for some even if you are born on feb 14th[/FONT]


    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even in childhood if your mother loves your brother more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even among siblings if your brother loves your sister more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even in schools if your teacher loves your other friend more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even in college if your boyfriend loves your friend more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even in work place when your boss loves your colleague more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even in life when your husband loves another woman more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even if your children love your husband more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you even if your extended family loves your children more,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]It eludes you when it loves your aged self than your youth more..[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]May be god loved me so wanted all my attention to him more… [/FONT]
     
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  2. kanaka Raghavan

    kanaka Raghavan IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear sunkan
    Nice write up.It really really made me think.
     
  3. Vysan

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    Dear Sunkan,

    It eludes me more when my girl friend love my friend more,
    It eludes me more when my wife loves my kids more,
    It eludes me more when my kids loves my wife more

    It eludes me more that I couldnt pay full attention to GOD, who loves me more because of these petty worries....

    Nice one....

    Veda
     
  4. aishu22

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    Dear Sunkan,
    A very nice poem.....Enjoyed it!

    Vysan Sir,
    A very nice reply...How True!
     
  5. sunkan

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    thanku kanaka,
    just making attempts wondered every where people are writing so many love poems what would a person with no one write and these lines jumped out..sunkan
     
  6. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    thanks veda for joining in here with your lines..sure what u say is true..sk
     
  7. sunkan

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    dear aishu,
    thanks for the appreciation and it is encouraging sunkan
     
  8. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Very well written to the point.
    Veda's reply adds "merugu" to the nice lines.
     
  9. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice one Sunkan......Nice play of words and nice you are thinking of those who have no one who loves them......
    I do hope that they are able to remember God then.....and I want to add.......One should love oneself.....others too will begin to love them....?!

    L, Kamla
     
  10. sunkan

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    i thought u will also join with some merugu here, mm ok thanku sunkan
     
    Last edited: Feb 7, 2008

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