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Inseparable!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Oct 9, 2013.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    At times I've handled you harsh,
    You've never complained once dear.
    I always assumed you to last.
    Now I am trembling with fear.

    Gone are the days when you got up
    And worked for twenty plus hours.
    Gone is my resolve to push you up.
    You are indicating that I am not clever.

    As you take every blow with silence,
    I should have recognized you dear.
    But now gone is all your resilence,
    Yet you never scolded me here.

    The worthiness of something is known,
    When it disappears or breaks down a day.
    I am late to realize this known
    Fact, which will permanently stay.

    I see you break down but I am
    Useless as always, to you dear.
    I now refuse to stay calm,
    But my guilt now kills me here.

    Without you, I am nothing,
    But never accepted it before.
    Now its too late; I am seething
    With an anger like never before.

    Whats the use of all this dear?
    You have been with me for long.
    Request you to grant me a mere
    Chance to correct all my wrongs!
     
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  2. charmbabez

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    wonderful lines rgsI can feel an Any Time Poem (ATP) machine in you.melting btw the lines.
     
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    Vey nice RGS....enjoyed reading it...
     
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    Thanks Charmbabez, for your like and first feedback. Just to add further, there is also another subtle angle in this post - The two that are being talked about, can be taken as an adamant / ignoring one and the spouse as well as, the mind and the body. Hope you will see that it fits too. Thanks for your feedback. -rgs
     
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    Thanks a lot Scorpio707. Very happy to receive your feedback. And I must add - you have a wonderful image as your avatar. -rgs
     
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    It's a pleasure to read yours poems RGS...like Charmbabez mentioned you definitely are an ATP machine:thumbsupand thanks for your comment on my avatar pic...I got hooked to that image the moment it caught my eye :)
     
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    Mine too. Thanks for your appreciation Scorpio707. -rgs
     

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