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INDUS LADIES CALLING-29th March-Orphanage Visit to mark 3rd anniversary of IL

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Paulina, Apr 7, 2008.

  1. Paulina

    Paulina Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Let us rekindle hope within each desolate little heart
    Of those forlorn children,distressed and distraught
    Hold their hands,sing merry songs and help their tired feet
    As they persevere to climb Life's mountain steep.

    Soothe their weary brows and wipe their tears
    To see the silver lining behind life's darkest fears
    Let us fathom deeply ,how dire their need may be
    To be saved from their bitter destiny

    If all our heads and hearts unite to reach
    All those innocent lost and desperate ones that seek
    We should begrudge no resource or time
    For thus shall all our lives be made sublime.

    It was wonderful reading about the visit to the Good Life Centre Orphanage and viewing all those lovely pictures posted after the visit.It was a beautiful way of celebrating the third anniversary of IL.:cheers
    Just thought of sending across these lines after that.
    warm regards:wave
    PAULINA
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Rani Paulina Amma
    SuperBow............
    Just don't have words to express my Dear............
    The last 4 lines speaks all even if we show these kids a small ray of hope to them it will be the greatest gift to them in life.
    Wow it is such a touchy one...............
     
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  3. Paulina

    Paulina Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Habibi ,o habibi, ( sorry I forgot!) YOUR ROYAL MAJESTY ,EGYPTIAN QUEEN OF MASTI MAGIC,:queen

    Thanks for your gracious comments which I your loyal subject accept most humbly:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown SHUKRAN , SHUKRAN, SHUKRAN !

    Big LaughBig LaughBig Laugh

    warm regards
    PAULINA:wave
     
  4. aishu22

    aishu22 Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Paulina,
    The poem was great BowEspecially the last four lines were touchy.Keep them coming!
     
  5. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Paulina,

    Where had you hidden this wonderful talent ?My God! You write so beautifully.!! It was indeed a tribute to the visit and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
    Love,
    Devika
     
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    Dearmost and most respected mam

    Wow!great writing by u.and it deeply touched my heart.........iam getting inspired to do more and more for the kids........thank u mam.........for such a heartfelt feelings,........
     
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    dear paulina,

    very touching poem.....................i could feel more and more for those children after reading your poem.............

    love
    padma
     
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    Senorita Silver IL'ite

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    Wow, fantastic and very touchy poem... thanks for sharing..Bow
     
  9. Sriniketan

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    Paulina,
    great tribute to the wonderful thing that happened on 29th March, '08.

    sriniketan
     
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    wonderful paulina,
    in so little a verse there
    are so many meaning hidden
    you take us through that path
    and show us another world,
    that aches for the love which
    we hold in abundance to share
    but hardly get the chance
    to be amongst those lovely fairies
    who have been deprived of love...sunkan
     

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