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In search of solitude!

Discussion in 'Cheeniya's Senile Ramblings' started by Cheeniya, Mar 3, 2007.

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  1. Nov 21, 2012 #41
    rgsrinivasan

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    That was definitely a shade different Cheeniya Sir. And good to read, as usual. I tried to read between the lines and was of course happier that I got one or two.

    Being alone for sometime a day
    May give you some minutes to think.
    What went right and what not may
    Be thought then in a quick wink.

    Who are you missing the most
    To who will miss you the most
    May come and go in a flash.
    Those poople you shouldn't crash.

    You may also find this for sure,
    That you are just one in a billion
    Species that are born and endure
    Before returning to the pavilion.

    And it may dawn to you then
    That you are never ever alone.
    And its only a matter of when
    You get that fact which is known.
     
    rgsrinivasan, Nov 21, 2012
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  2. Nov 24, 2012 #42
    Cheeniya

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    My dear RGS
    A great effort as usual! Your poem is more abstract than the thought that I tried to convey through my thread and that is no mean achievement! The last four lines of your poem are my pick of the lot. It is so true that we are never ever alone even when we are far from the maddening crowd. How can any one be alone when he is heart is crowded? Those who feel lonely are the ones that keep their hearts shut and bar entry of all!
    Sri
     
    Cheeniya, Nov 24, 2012
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