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In memory of a daughter!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Nivedi, Nov 20, 2007.

  1. karuth

    karuth New IL'ite

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    Dear Friends,

    We are trying to see the lighter side only...My poem is a consolation for the mother in first poem as if it was said from the daughter..Thats all..Come on dear frnds.....No haunting..no depressing..okay!!!..
    smile :)

    karthika.
     
  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very nice ones, Nivedi, Blondie and Karuth, which was also emotional!
    I understand the reason for those lines!

    It is true Nivedi, still females undergo such tragic end even in this era! Happy to note that you had helped and helping people in this regard.

    Blondie, you have correctly portrayed the plight of the people down here who has lost the loved ones!

    Karuth, your reply was very good from the view point of a daughter!

    sriniketan
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    hai friends,
    the air is filled with so many turmoils the paper says the lady from trichy thrown out of her car to go into a comatose stage and now these poems, it looked all interconnected though it is not, please do look towards light like how kamla put it, and move ahead and come up with a lively poem to remove the stains of tears left behind..sunkan
     
  4. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hey guys

    you have really made me emotional...so let me try to put my words.(??)..scribbles here......maynot be really coherent....but what with me in a a mood swing..hope it does mean something.....

    Mom I know the pain you felt,
    when you nurtured me for nine months
    I know what it is to advice
    and be looked down...

    Mom i understand what you understood

    from the first words i spoke.


    Mom I understand though you were not with me
    You were always with me...

    Mom i understand why you had your celebraton
    everytime i made my achievements

    Mom, nothing can replace you,
    How can i ever thank you,
    For you are the one who taught me
    how to be a MOM................

    Mom when i see her, i just stare at her
    grinning sheepishly, as i see myself there

    The trials we have survived, the pain i gave,
    Mom, how i wish i could take that back....
    I learn to be proud even at the worst,
    as you have been.....

    I know you were not perfect, but I'd never
    change a thing about you, because
    that is what is so special about you...

    I thank god everyday
    For a mom and a daughter as special
    as you both..............
     
  5. Sujimallige

    Sujimallige Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear blondie,
    I can perfectly understand ur feelings as i also lost my father this year.Can feel ur pain.But I hope ur trip back home will lighten ur heart.Best wishes for a happy trip.

    Dear karuth,
    I respect ur feelings and emotions.Sorry if my post hurt u.It was a wonderful post indeed but made me cry,so i wrote the reply.My intention was never to hurt anybody.

    Dear shanvy,
    V gud poem there (i guess u wrote it on the moment).
     
  6. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    very nice one, Shanthi!

    sriniketan
     
  7. umasaras

    umasaras Senior IL'ite

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    Hi friends,
    I guess a little cheering up in the air by Shanvy and thanks for the poem. Good one Nivedi and Karuth.
    regds,
    uma
     
  8. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    hello Ladies
    O.M.G. what is happening it makes you sad to read such poems.
    Nivedi sorry to hear about your friend, it is so true even in this century such things still happening. I think the ladies have to become very strong and fight for they rights.
    Nivedi, karuth, Blondi and Shanthi your poems are so emotional.
    I have put an attachment got it yesterday felt very sad while reading it, but appreciated the kid is so brave ............
     

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  9. jaishree9

    jaishree9 Silver IL'ite

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    Oh God
    All the poems are so moving & making one to cry.
    I fear for the fututre of my daughters like any mother & these poems are touching & wringing the heart.
    Actually when one looses the parents it is very grieving, but time gives the healing touch & one accept that but loosing child ! GOD plz save everyone from that grief.
     
  10. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi suji,

    U are right. it was a momentary scribbling..was feeling too heavy reading all the others posts....to make it lighter............
     

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