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Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Shanvy, Jan 15, 2010.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Some days, I wish you were more,
    than what you are to me,
    Am I wishing for too much ??

    I wish you were my guardian angel,
    Chasing away my fears,
    Slaying the demons for me.
    Guarding and guiding always,

    I wish you were my light,
    Brightening my days,
    Spreading warmth around,
    Chasing away the darkness

    I wish you were my solitude,
    Comforting me, cheering me,
    Calming out the restlessness,
    Giving me hope of things to come,

    I wish you were my music,
    Soothing me to sleep,
    Weaving magical dreams,
    Making everything right,

    I wish you were my fragrance,
    Always staying with me,
    Blending in everything I do,
    Spreading sweetness around,

    I wish you were my sight,
    Filling the desire to see,
    The world through your eyes,
    Coloring everything beautiful,

    I wish you were my wings,
    Taking me across the oceans,
    And the azure skies,
    Touching paradise together,

    Though I wish for more,
    I want you to be just you,
    Making me whole,
    Without much effort.


    This morning, I was thinking, woman/man is never satisfied with his/her spouse, sometimes, it is just simple things like dressing, talking and some times very big issues.:hide:.The thought led me to scribble this..



    No doubt, there are articles/books on what man want from a woman, and what woman wants from her man..but do these help i wonder..


    Sometimes it is nice if we are able to accept the person as he/she is.
     
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  3. Saraswathipv

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    Shanthi dear,

    As I read this poem of yours, I was wondering why?? are you anyway upset or yearning for something ...But was releived as I read the reason behind this poem (scribble :rant).

    Loved the last verse ..

    Though I wish for more,
    I want you to be just you,
    Making me whole,
    Without much effort
    .
    Hope you continue scribbling :crazy.

    Bye
     
  4. deraj

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    Dear Shanthi

    Its true & very nice to see it in your own verse.
     
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    Shanthi,

    Realities in life is what you portrayed. Very nice.

    For a moment I thought, why not Shanthi go to Saravana Stores in Ranaganathan Street and she can get what she wants....

    Let me run away from you, before you throw something on me.
     
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    Yes Shanvy and vysan,
    Life is full of ups and downs.. but thats the fun of living it.
    nice post
    gisjul
     
  7. Shanvy

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    GP,

    thank you.
     
  8. Shanvy

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    Dear saras,

    It is not just your other half, even with kids, friends sometimes, we want more than what they are.

    i need a little more discipline from my kids, when people around tell me that they are well behaved.

    i want a more friendlier friend (?) if there is one.

    Man is a complex person. we go in search of that missing ingredient, never realizing things can be happier, interesting, when you can make something out of the existing ones.

    thanks for being her.
     
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    Deraj,

    Nice to have you back here. Many a time, we don't stop to think what we have before going in search of what we think we need.
     
  10. Shanvy

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    venkat,

    no need to run. instead of saravan stores, i will give you a better idea. have you been to the music stores recently. for example at giri you have this facility , where you can listen and select the songs and get them stored on your mp3,cd.

    if only things could be that simple. but will life be so interesting???

    wishing and wanting are two different things.

    thanks for being here.
     

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