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I Wish I Was Double

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunkan, Feb 19, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    I wish , I was two.

    My replica goes to school,
    when I visit a zoo.
    While I watch a zebra
    my replica solves algebra!
    One plays hide and seek,
    the other a computer freak.
    One completes homework,
    other travel around the world

    While one plays throw ball
    The other studies all
    while one fragile and weak in limbs

    Would love the other to be a beauty queen
    While one is left with age and plight
    Would love the other travel in flight
    One is left in loneliness
    Would love the other to flirt and be free
    as a child so naughty I was
    But one side always sulked cried
    While the other was bashed and tried
    So much to do, so little done.
    With out worry , just for once,
    let me fly and go away,

    Seek the beauty around the world,
    as never will I, travel this way!
    Let me make this world go wild,
    and be happy , as a child.
    Wonder, it would ever be true,
    I wish I wish, I was two!



    INSPIRED BY A FRIEND..SUNKAN
     
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  2. ansh12

    ansh12 Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan Ma'am

    The peom of yours transported me to my childhood. Every child would love to read this peom. wow! loed reading thta bashing part.

    Wish I had a clone!

    Best wishes
    Ansh
     
  3. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Sunkan,
    Happy to see your 'other' you---through your poems.

    True we wish the same.....
    Reminded me of the song
    'irandu manam vendum..

    why can't one of me work at home and other..helping others in needy outside..
    why can't one be at home and the other..fly and see the world outside
    why can't one be ignorant ( which is bliss, sometimes) and the other be wiser
    why can't one be replying this thread and other be reading ..

    The list goes on right!

    sriniketan
     
  4. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear ansh,
    in childhood algebra was a gabra always, i could never calculate with suppose this is x or y or something but yes if they had put it as suppose we calculate the rice bag or oranges also would help but my mind used to be distracted to that x more than the sum so no furthering the matter there. i used to wish had a wizard in maths telling me what to do or someone who is invisible to the world and guiding as no u take this decision and it is good for you kind how wonderful the world would be..sunkan
     
  5. sunkan

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    thanks for joining me gang pal...Bowsunkan
     
  6. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello akka

    double
    inspired
    friend who...?
    me too
    want to be here
    and there too...
    cook and write too
    sing and run too
    watch tv and sleep too
    old and young too
    the list endless...
    sure you want a couple
    of pages of doubles?


    sathya
     

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