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I met him ( my love ) today!!!

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Jun 25, 2009.

  1. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    I would love to eulogize you
    But no matter what I say,
    These words I say seem so less
    Compared to my love for you
    You’re needed to ease this duress

    I waited for you , been so long,
    I kept assuring myself
    The months rolling by
    You’ll come, yes, I was sure
    This anodyne never seemed dry

    I watched lovers walking past
    And my heart longed your touch
    But couldn’t go on ,could I ?
    Just living vicariously
    Come,Oh … the time’s passin by

    Finally you arrive ,I run to greet you
    Shunning inhibitions,
    And let you kiss me all over.
    Love the taste of this elixir.
    The aphrodisiac ,the smell of my lover.

    You tease me as you blow on my face
    And caress my skin
    Igniting passion long awaited
    Kissing my eyes as I shut them
    At last I feel completely sated

    You bring along my laughter too
    And we dance in glee
    You provide me that respite
    Ask you to promise, you won’t leave
    Deaf to your reply, hold on to you tight

    You stay a while, bathing my life
    With happiness galore
    Then I can see you’re ready to move,
    Tears flow, I hold you , beg you ,
    ‘Don’t go,.you’re my gift from heaven above’,

    You try to comfort me, assure me,
    And promise, soon you’ll be back
    I trust you, take your word for it.
    Cause God has chalked the track
    I’ll wait in hope till next time we meet

    Its good bye sweetheart..
    Good bye RAIN
    Till we meet again.

    Love,
    Devika
     
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  2. Deepali_deepali

    Deepali_deepali Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Devika,

    Absolutely wonderful !!!! I really could'nt guess, this yearning was for rain... OK, I get it - Monsoon has finally arrived in Mumbai...Send it here also, Its been a long wait !!

    Beautiful poem, beautiful words...Loved it.. A great writer is here..Read it loud......

    With Love..
     
  3. Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Devs,

    So you met my lover boy there...I am waiting for him here and you have kidnapped him...too bad dear. Please do send him here....we badly need him. Be a good girl ok.
     
  4. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Hey Deepali,

    Thats a lavish compliment and I prefer bathin more in that than in the rain;)hehee

    Thankyou sooo very much.. Im glad you really enjoyed the poem.. I love rains:)

    Ok will ask him to come there soon:)

    Love,
    Devika
     
  5. Devika Menon

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    Dear Lali,

    How are you now yaar???? Good to see you here:)) I dint kidnap him yaar, just lovingly called him... Do that he'll come running to you.. hehehe as it is he never stays in one place too long;)

    Love,
    Devs
     
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    Lovely poem,Devika.Yearning for the rain and enjoying it -- these are everyone's feelings.You've expressed these beautifully.
     
  7. Devika Menon

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    Thankyou so much Kam,

    Welcome to my blogs and glad to know you enjoyed the poem:))

    Love,
    Devika
     
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    Padmini IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear mole,
    I want to be the first one to give fb for this lovely description or shall I say poem. but.... better late than never. I first thought while going through the verse , it must about "breeze". abeautiful imagination!!! but that " man" never wants to peep here because he I think he won't pay to heed to an old woman's words!I can visualize you dancing like"julie Andrews""rain dropn on roses"!!!I recollected this poem"

    Rain is sweet
    It drips and drops
    You can dance in the rain
    And even drink the rain.
    I love rain.
    with love
    pad
     
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    Mindian IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Devs,

    Wondering who was making my friend so passionate and
    yearning for more:)..quite disappointed it is just the rain:)

    hey just kidding..i too love the rains but it takes a poetess like you to express it so beautifully :thumbsup

    love
    Mindi
     
  10. Devika Menon

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    Dear Mom,

    Thanks a ton for the valuable comments. Yeah you seem to be a rain lover too...Well he's lucky , so many vying for him..hehheee.

    So good to have you here:))

    Love,
    Your Mol
     

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