I met him ( my love ) today!!!

Devika Menon · Jun 25, 2009

I would love to eulogize you
But no matter what I say,
These words I say seem so less
Compared to my love for you
You’re needed to ease this duress

I waited for you , been so long,
I kept assuring myself
The months rolling by
You’ll come, yes, I was sure
This anodyne never seemed dry

I watched lovers walking past
And my heart longed your touch
But couldn’t go on ,could I ?
Just living vicariously
Come,Oh … the time’s passin by

Finally you arrive ,I run to greet you
Shunning inhibitions,
And let you kiss me all over.
Love the taste of this elixir.
The aphrodisiac ,the smell of my lover.

You tease me as you blow on my face
And caress my skin
Igniting passion long awaited
Kissing my eyes as I shut them
At last I feel completely sated

You bring along my laughter too
And we dance in glee
You provide me that respite
Ask you to promise, you won’t leave
Deaf to your reply, hold on to you tight

You stay a while, bathing my life
With happiness galore
Then I can see you’re ready to move,
Tears flow, I hold you , beg you ,
‘Don’t go,.you’re my gift from heaven above’,

You try to comfort me, assure me,
And promise, soon you’ll be back
I trust you, take your word for it.
Cause God has chalked the track
I’ll wait in hope till next time we meet

Its good bye sweetheart..
Good bye RAIN
Till we meet again.

Love,
Devika

Deepali_deepali · Jun 25, 2009

Dear Devika,

Absolutely wonderful !!!! I really could'nt guess, this yearning was for rain... OK, I get it - Monsoon has finally arrived in Mumbai...Send it here also, Its been a long wait !!

Beautiful poem, beautiful words...Loved it.. A great writer is here..Read it loud......

With Love..

Lalitha Shivaguru · Jun 25, 2009

Dear Devs,

So you met my lover boy there...I am waiting for him here and you have kidnapped him...too bad dear. Please do send him here....we badly need him. Be a good girl ok.

Devika Menon · Jun 25, 2009

Hey Deepali,

Thats a lavish compliment and I prefer bathin more in that than in the rainhehee

Thankyou sooo very much.. Im glad you really enjoyed the poem.. I love rains

Ok will ask him to come there soon

Love,
Devika

Devika Menon · Jun 25, 2009

Dear Lali,

How are you now yaar???? Good to see you here) I dint kidnap him yaar, just lovingly called him... Do that he'll come running to you.. hehehe as it is he never stays in one place too long

Love,
Devs

Kam45 · Jun 25, 2009

Lovely poem,Devika.Yearning for the rain and enjoying it -- these are everyone's feelings.You've expressed these beautifully.

Devika Menon · Jun 25, 2009

Thankyou so much Kam,

Welcome to my blogs and glad to know you enjoyed the poem)

Love,
Devika

Padmini · Jun 26, 2009

Dear mole,
I want to be the first one to give fb for this lovely description or shall I say poem. but.... better late than never. I first thought while going through the verse , it must about "breeze". abeautiful imagination!!! but that " man" never wants to peep here because he I think he won't pay to heed to an old woman's words!I can visualize you dancing like"julie Andrews""rain dropn on roses"!!!I recollected this poem"

Rain is sweet

It drips and drops

You can dance in the rain

And even drink the rain.

I love rain.
with love
pad

Mindian · Jun 26, 2009

Hi Devs,

Wondering who was making my friend so passionate and
yearning for more..quite disappointed it is just the rain

hey just kidding..i too love the rains but it takes a poetess like you to express it so beautifully :thumbsup

love
Mindi

Devika Menon · Jun 26, 2009

Dear Mom,

Thanks a ton for the valuable comments. Yeah you seem to be a rain lover too...Well he's lucky , so many vying for him..hehheee.

So good to have you here)

Love,
Your Mol