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I Love You, But I Can't Live With You Part - 1

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by pranavi1987, Jul 24, 2018.

  1. peddadas

    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    ohhhh...Vinni was there...cool
     
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    Thank you Adharv for your lovely feedback :clap2:, episode is not short :cheer:, I write my story in word of four pages a day and then post it, yesterday was 4 pages too :banana:.

    glad it is interesting for all of you so that you felt it short:treadmill:
     
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    Sure, I will create one more character with your name :D
     
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    Going in very lovely direction .... I suspected that it must be Vinni when the seniors asked to propose a boy (ofcourse relating the past and present).

    Can not wait to know the reaction of the seniors when Vinni and Nandu would have laughed afterwards.:grinning-smiley-048:
     
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    Thank you Rampuri9 for your lovely comments
     
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    Thank you pumpkin, I am glad your guess is correct :banana:
     
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    Thank you periamma :clap2:
     
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    Loved this episode ... their 2nd meet ...
    Have loved ur writing and the flow of the story ...
    I had a feeling when the raging came to the proposal phase .... good going
     
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    Episode 39

    she came to senses first and screamed Vinni…………… Oh my god, I can’t believe my eyes.

    He is surprised, lifted her up and said…………Nandu I can’t believe you are here………………. What a pleasant surpise.

    Please Vinni, please leave me down she said laughing in excitement.

    You are here Nandu? That too Proposing me? How exciting is this? He said teasing her; and he guessed that it was part of ragging.

    She gave a pat on his shoulders and said, Proposing you, I will never do that mistake, see there, she showed seniors who are hiding back the tree.

    They were nervous till then, but after seeing Vineel’s reaction they were little relieved, he went near the tree and called.

    Come here girls, you always do things to irritate me, for first time you did something that made me happy, thank you all for that he said.

    Those seniors are disappointed!!!, they thought to rag Nandu and irritate her, but forget about ragging, they made two friends meet again.

    One senior girl pushed other girl and said, Look at your idea now, you gave idea to propose him, she really proposed and now they both are happy.

    Now what to do? Said another girl

    Wait for their wedding card and they left.

    They both went and sat on near by bench and started talking

    What is this Vinni? When did you land in Banglore? Nandu asked

    You know what Nandu, you are in womens engineering college, and we study at mens engineering college which is close by to this park.

    We usually come to the park evenings to relax, or to study together.

    Not only that, there is one more secret, if any boy or girl like each other, this is the place to meet.

    What? Boy and girl liking each other from two different colleges? Said Nandu in surprise.

    Yes, what will they do? Boy’s cant find girls in their college and girls cant find boys in their college, so this is the common place.

    Even, you come here for that, teased Nandu.

    I am not that lucky, no girl proposed me since last year I have joined here, you are the first one he said smiling.

    Nandu also smiled.

    What happened to you? Where was your phone? I came to meet you at your house too? Did you move from that area? Asked Vinni.

    Yes Vinni, after Kala aunty saw both of us, Mom became very strict and we moved to a different house, it is big house, but I missed all of you.

    I lost your contacts, and I always used to think of you and I am happy finally I saw you here.

    Where are you staying Nandu?

    In hostel

    What about you?

    Last year I stayed in hostel, this year we moved to a home.

    Is it? Very good.

    Vinni, How good were our olden days, I cherish every moment we spent with Prash bro and Sindhu.

    We all had lot of fun, now I am thinking at this point ,if we have Sindhu and Prash with us then it would have been fantastic.

    You remember, we used to eat Panipuri, ice creams, I used to come on cycle with you and you broke my bangle too.

    Hey do you have those bangles now? Asked Nandu.

    Vinni became silent, for a second

    What are you thinking? Vinni, I am talking to you? What are you thinking?

    Nothing

    I am asking you about Sindhu and Prash, I lost in touch with them,are you still in touch with them? I miss them a lot Nandu said.

    Nandu , I will tell you everything again, and It is late now, I will have to go back to my home, come I will drop you at your hostel.

    My hostel is not far Vinni, I will walk she said.

    I have a bike now, come he said.

    You bought a bike Vinni? Wow , I still remember you going on cycle she said.

    Yes, that was then ,now I am grown up my dear Nandu he said.

    Nandu came with Vinni,but she hesitated to sit on his bike.

    What are you seeing? Come and sit said Vineel.

    No, I am getting scared? She said

    For what? This is new city, no one knows us, I hope you don’t have any aunties here , he said and smiled.

    Nandu also smiled and sat on his bike.

    Vineel started his bike, Nandu felt so excited, she is sitting first time on a bike and she saw Vinni after a long time.

    She sat on Vinni cycle too many times, but now on bike she is feeling some thing different.

    Why am I feeling different? Vinni is not a stranger to me and I sat on his cycle too many times she thought to herself and smiled.

    He changed a lot, he became very handsome in two years she thought

    What are you thinking? we are almost near your hostel he said.

    Vineel can I ask you some thing?

    Ofcourse

    How did you feel after you saw me after two years? Did I change? She asked

    He stopped the bike suddenly

    What happened ? why did you stop the bike?

    We are near your hostel Nandu he said.

    Ok, answer my question she said

    Do you want me to tell truth?

    Yes she said

    I know you as a little girl, with two small plaits and now you transformed into a beautiful young girl he said.

    Nandu smiled really?

    Yes , was I beautiful then? or now? she asked

    You were beautiful then also , but you didn’t had any brain then , now I don’t know he said.

    She hit him with her hand on his and said I don’t have brain ? then what about you Intelligent master?

    I am super intelligent then and now , he said and started his bike.

    When are we meeting again? I want to meet Prash and Sindhu also, shall we call them here ? she asked.

    Vineel took a deep breath and said, Nandu, will you come to my home this Sunday for lunch?

    Lunch? Who is cooking? If you are not cooking then I will come she smiled

    Don’t worry, I will ask my friend to cook, will you come?

    Nandu want to go, but she thought ,is it okay to visit his home where he is staying with his friends.

    What are you thinking? He asked

    Don’t get scared, I will not eat you he smiled.

    No, I am thinking about your friends and will it be good? She expressed her doubt.

    Don’t worry, It will be absolutely good, you come first he said.

    Ok done she said.

    See you on Sunday then only two more days he said.

    Ok Vinni she waved him.

    Happy to see you Nandu , I can see that happiness in your eyes too he said.

    Nandu smiled and she went back to her hostel.

    Vineel went back to his home……………………………..
     
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    Wonderful episodes :) waiting for love birds story updates
     
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