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I Can See Clearly Now The Rain Has Gone

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SuiDhaaga, Sep 2, 2021.

  1. SuiDhaaga

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    So much rain
    As I trudge
    Through the
    Rough terrain
    Hoping to find
    Myself again

    I slosh through the valleys
    I slosh through the fields
    One has to have resolve
    Made of stainless steel

    I climb many a stairs
    I start to forget my old
    Worries and cares

    I look down at how far I've come
    There is no turning back
    My efforts cannot be undone

    I continue to climb
    I pray I don't slip on slime
    I set forth and
    Keep the end in mind

    Finally the skies clear
    The sun dries what was damp
    I see a place so beautiful
    We should hide it from
    Many a map

    I am here at last
    After all my efforts
    The scenery is more beautiful
    Than any fatty, creamy dessert

    Down below I see a parade of colors
    Courtesy of different species of flowers
    I see many animals live in harmony
    There is only sacred stillness
    Sans any cacophony
     
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    Beautiful poem on rain and I just liked it. I love rain when it doesn't accompanied by thunders.:smile:
     
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    Thank you so much!
     
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    SD, this is one of your best! I love the mood. :thumbsup:
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    Thank you so so so much!!!!!
     

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