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I Await Your Arrival

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PrityGP, Jan 22, 2010.

  1. PrityGP

    PrityGP Senior IL'ite

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    I await your arrival,
    With hastened breadth,
    With tired eyes,
    And rebellious threat.

    Threat of decay,
    Insanity,
    Of Loss,
    And Vanity.

    Beloved, why don't you come by,
    Just like that.
     
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  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Don't have a rebellious threat of insanity..one should be sane enough to see the beloved when he comes just like that..
    Be cheerful to receive him..

    sriniketan
     
  3. PrityGP

    PrityGP Senior IL'ite

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    Hey...I am happily married :)

    This poem was written years ago, keeping a concept in mind...not self experience exactly...

    Thanks for reading and giving it a thought :)

    Regards,
    Prity.
     
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    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Prity, I commented like that after reading your concept..
    Glad to see your 'real concept' now..:thumbsup:-)

    sriniketan
     

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