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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sreeram, Dec 16, 2015.

  1. sreeram

    sreeram IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you so much Chandrika for reading the story so far and am really happy to know that you felt it connected...

    Welcome to IL, hope you enjoy all the stories here...
     
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    Hi Shivalaya dear, happy to see you after awhile... Thank you so much dear. Happy o happy to know you liked it...

    Ha ha ha... good guess.. let's see what he is up to...
     
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    Am very happy to know that you enjoyed the update... Even i don't know what else to say other than saying a thank you dear. Though it's still a small word.

    Ha ha ha... welcome ji welcome..waiting to receive you....
     
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    Priya when is the next episode, already comments gone to 8 pages dear... see how are enthusiastic, pls post soon dear...
     
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    Very nice episode Priya... Waiting to read about Raj's reaction. .
     
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    Will post by tonight dear for sure...

    8 pages huh.... oh my god...
     
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    Thank you Neelam dear... Glad that you liked it... will post in couple of hours.
     
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    Rupa and Dayalan were feeling excited when they reached the marriage hall gate. They turned and saw Raj who was casually looking outside. Dayalan parked the car in one corner of the hall entrance and all three got down. Raj was little startled when he saw Gayathri coming towards him carrying the aarthi plate with few other ladies. Just then he felt a hand over his shoulders and found Shiva standing beside him.

    Shiva pulled Raj along and made him to stand next to him.

    "Hey you are my bestman for the day. So you get to enjoy all that luxury that a groom gets. So come don't feel shy". Shiva was cladded in silk dhoti and shirt and looked very handsome. Both Shiva and Raj were almost of the same height and with good physic.

    Gayathri and Anusha took aarthi and welcomed all of them. Raj was admiring the banner carrying the names "Karthika weds Shiva". His mind started to waver seeing the name board and his eyes were following the decorations that were made outside the building and when he turned to the other side, Prem jumped suddenly from somewhere and diverted his attention.

    There was another banner on the other side which had the words Engagement of "Aditi with Raj". Prem noticed that Raj's glance was moving to towards the banner and he came running from inside and tried to divert him. Shiva was asked to take the stage were the engagement was about to take place for Shiva and Karthika. Shiva pulled Raj with him and climbed the stage. Raj turned to see his parents but they vanished from sight as soon as Raj went with Shiva. Prem stood next to Raj hiding his smile.

    The purohit asked Shiva to sit in the wooden plank and called for the bride's brother to start the formalities. Vishal came there and Shiva introduced him to Raj. Vishal smiled mischievously at him and started to follow the purohit's instructions. He kept kumkum and sandal paste in his forehead and wore him the garland. Then the purohit gestured the ladies to bring the bride.

    Raj's face immediately lit up and his eyes followed the direction in which the ladies went. He was longing to see Aditi from the moment he got down from the car and his eyes was looking for her every where. He was eagerly waiting to have a glimpse of her but fate no no... people around him were testing his patience. He saw Karthika coming out and her face was glowing with happiness and he was feeling happy for her and Shiva. The next moment his eyes started to search Aditi's face and she was no where found.

    Karthika saw that look on his face and walked to the stage and sat next to Shiva and gestured him to see Raj. Shiva's sister came and kept sandal paste and kumkum tikka and she wore the garland to Karthika. Vishal put a chain in Shiva's neck and a bracelet in his hand and Shiva's sister put a necklace in Karthika's neck and wore her bangles. They took blessings of all of them and Karthika went inside.

    Shiva held Raj's hand who was about get down from the stage. He raised his brows in question and by then the purohit called Raj to sit on the wooden plank. He was startled when he heard the purohit say, "We can start the rituals for next engagement. You are the bridegroom right... Come and sit here".

    Raj thought he didn't hear the purohit's words clearly and looked at him again. But he was shocked to the core when he saw his mom carrying a tray in hand and getting to the stage with a smile along with his dad. Shiva and Prem gestured him to sit when they found him standing like a statue.

    Raj turned to see them but they smiled at him and forcefully made him to sit. He looked at them in dismay, "What's wrong with you guys". His inner voice yelled at them. Raj was in such a state shock that even his brain stopped to react. He just kept staring blankly and Aditi's face flashed in front of his eyes for fraction of seconds. Before he could come back to reality he faced the next shock. He saw his friend Prabhu walking towards the stage with a wide smile, his shock doubled when he saw all his college friends slowly walking towards him from the last row.

    "What is happening with me? Am i dreaming? What are these guys doing here?" His brain was trying to alert him and there was no chance or choice given to him to react. He didn't hear any of the sound or any one's voice. He saw Vishal coming near him with all smiles and repeated the same procedure that he did for Shiva. When Vishal garland him Raj was in peak of shock.

    Each thing happened in such a pace of speed that Raj couldn't even think of anything else. His ears turned sharp when he heard the purohit calling for the bride. "Bride....????" His heart was ready to jump out of his mouth hearing that word.

    The Lcd screen which was displaying all the happenings in the marriage hall now made Raj to feel dizzy. The video grapher was taking the video of the banner behind Raj which displayed the shock or should i say the big and the best surprise of his life. The screen now showed Aditi walking from the room along with her mom, Karthika and few more ladies. He couldn't still believe his eyes and kept switching his glance from Aditi to his parents and again to Aditi in disbelief.

    Raj was stunned seeing Aditi beautifully draped in the silk saree and the way she looked at him while walking towards the stage. His jaw dropped open seeing her beautiful face and he was openly admiring her beauty though he hadn't recovered completely from the shock yet.

    "Dei macha, close your mouth before some fly enters inside da". Prem kneeled beside him and patted his shoulders with a mischievous smile.

    Shiva and Raj's parents laughed and felt happy for him.

    Raj felt like dancing crazily, he wanted to shout and say "i love you all". But he just kept silent looking at Aditi, who came and sat next to him with a smile. Aditi started to feel shy when she sat next to him in front of such a big crowd.

    ....Cont....
     
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    Sorry for the small post friends. Next update will be a lengthy one for sure.
     
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    Wow Pri sweetie. Wonderful episode dear :) Loved the way they executed it :) Raj we are also jumping in Joy!! Finally dream come true :) Am more excited than Raj Pri darling :) Wonderfully you took it dear. I was also sitting in that hall and was watching everything. What is the menu Pri ;)
     
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