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  1. Aug 9, 2016 #1
    Scorpio707

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    The glow in my eyes…
    Warmth in my heart…
    Smile on my lips…
    Ears that are twitched…
    With you I feel hitched...
    A word or two here and there…
    Stealing glances…trying hard
    Not to stare…
    A million things I wish to say…
    But time does not give me way…
    And when you go away….
    I bid goodbye to the day….
    Knowing I’m smitten by you…
    Mixed with water, I am your clay…
     
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    Stitched in love, etched in heart with love all the way...

    Scorps you are mercury droplets of love - u know what mercury does :)
     
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    Nice one Meenu! Love smitten all the way!
     
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    Oh GG did you have to bring science here for poetry :facepalm: .
    Well if trust my basic science instincts , mercury is toxic and exposure to it is harmful to so and so :p:D . So all those who read my poems are going to be exposed to love, nice isn't :smiley:
     
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    Thanks Laks, you were quick to respond :). I liked the footer note , stay weird ah :D:thumbsup:
     
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    Lol

    U miss the point - haven't u spilled mercury in a crucible and played :)

    I compared to that quality only :)
     
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    LOL...looks like I definitely missed a lot of things here:) . Average IQ....GG ;)
     
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    Nicely written Meenu! I love the way you said
    and of course the last is simply to die for!:worship2:
     
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    Nice one :)
     
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